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If friends from another country were going to spend time in your country, what city or place would you suggest they visit? Using details and examples, explain why. v.1

If friends from another country were going to spend time in your country, what city or place would you suggest they visit? Using details and examples, explain why. v. 1
Nowadays, there are more wanderer's and explorers than ever before. The rise in tourist's all around the globe has raised a few issues related to the environment. In this essay, I will suggest some problem associated with it and propose some solution. The biggest disadvantage of the travellers is the negligent. Many of the visitors leave a huge amount of waste during their stay, neglecting the fact that they are polluting the environment. For example, the mountains and the rivers are the most serene places in the current world, but we often find thrash lying in many places which were untouched a decade ago. As a result, It affects the tourist's and sometimes sends wrong signal to travellers around the globe. The solution to this is everyone should be more responsible and not pollute their surroundings, supporting in creating a clean and healthy environment for everyone. Another adverse effect of increasing tourism is the construction. The upward rise in tourist has allowed the private and public sector to construct hotels, in order to meet the increasing population of tourists in the respective area. For instance, Kashmir, India has been the trending destination for people around Asia, allowing a lot of construction in the valley. As a consequence, the landslides are occurring more often than ever. As a solution, the Government should intervene in places like these to stop construction and allocate land far from the mountains, which will help in restoring natural beauty and less prone to hazards. In conclusion, whereas travelling does rejuvenate your mind and soul, but it should not be done on a cost of contaminating the environment. Personally, we should always fill ourselves with memory and leave nothing but footprints. It will greatly help in preserving the nature.
Nowadays, there are more
wanderer's
and explorers than ever
before
. The rise in tourist's all around the globe has raised a few issues related to the
environment
. In this essay, I will suggest
some
problem associated with it and propose
some
solution.

The biggest disadvantage of the
travellers
is the negligent.
Many
of the visitors
leave
a huge amount of waste during their stay, neglecting the fact that they are polluting the
environment
.
For example
, the mountains and the rivers are the most serene places in the
current
world,
but
we
often
find thrash lying in
many
places which
were untouched
a decade ago.
As a result
, It affects the tourist's and
sometimes
sends
wrong
signal to
travellers
around the globe. The solution to this is everyone should be more responsible and not pollute their surroundings, supporting in creating a clean and healthy
environment
for everyone.

Another adverse effect of increasing tourism is the construction. The upward rise in tourist has
allowed
the private and public sector to construct hotels, in order to
meet
the increasing population of tourists in the respective area.
For instance
, Kashmir, India has been the trending destination for
people
around Asia, allowing
a lot of
construction in the valley. As a consequence, the landslides are occurring more
often
than ever. As a solution, the
Government
should intervene in places like these to
stop
construction and allocate land far from the mountains, which will
help
in restoring natural beauty and less prone to hazards.

In conclusion
, whereas travelling does rejuvenate your mind and soul,
but
it should not
be done
on a cost of contaminating the
environment
.
Personally
, we should always fill ourselves with memory and
leave
nothing
but
footprints. It will
greatly
help
in preserving the nature.
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IELTS essay If friends from another country were going to spend time in your country, what city or place would you suggest they visit? Using details and examples, explain why. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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