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4. Using the examples of the peanut bug and the morpho butterfly, explain the concept of revealing coloration. v.1

4. Using the examples of the peanut bug and the morpho butterfly, explain the concept of revealing coloration. v. 1
The current generation loves material things rather than inner qualities. Nowadays, the value of a person is closely watched through their social status and materials that they have owned while in earlier times it depends on honour, kindness, and trust but the current day these all qualities has vanished from our society. Social status plays a vital role in social life because the current generation is more materialistic than realistic. These trends lead our generation to give importance to luxury items and social status. In other words, the cost of the mobile phone is determining the status of an individual. If a person has IPHONE then he or she gets respect in society. Even though people judge each though phone, dressing style, none can understand the value of real qualities. For instance, a recent study conducted by the Oxford university found that 99 percent of iPhone users are unaware of the features which iPhone offers. They bought this to get social status from society. Currently, we are living in an era that, our qualities can be measured in terms of our physical luxury items. While respect becomes materialized in this era, many people fund that it is better to provide respect according to their qualities. Experience makes a perfect man, hence an experienced person can teach food qualities the current generation. Soft skills are generated or inherited from our parents so it is recommended to give respect to people who own hear, respect and trust, then only they can teach good morals to the current generation. In other words, some properties that we cannot buy from the market rather than it must be got from the experience by respecting people who own this quality we are directly or indirectly inherit these qualities. For example, a report appears in a Sunday magazine state that 56 percentage f people who have an interest in the personal characters than material things can accomplish their goals. Something is precious in the world fund it and obtain it. In Conclusion, personalities may vary some may have a focus on their material things that can bring respect rather than personal qualities. In my opinion personal, features such as honour, trust, kindness will help for the existence of the world.
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generation
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loves
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material
things
rather
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qualities
. Nowadays, the value of a person is
closely
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watched
through their
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social
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status
and
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materials
that they have
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owned
while in earlier times it depends on
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honour
, kindness, and trust
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but
the
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current
day these all
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qualities
has vanished from our society.

Social
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status
plays a vital role in
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social
life
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because
the
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current
generation is more materialistic than realistic. These trends lead our generation to give importance to luxury items and
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social
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status
.
In other words
, the cost of the mobile phone is determining the
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status
of an individual. If a person has
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IPHONE
then he or she
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gets
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respect
in society.
Even though
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people
judge each though phone, dressing style, none can understand the value of real
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qualities
.
For instance
, a recent study conducted by the Oxford university found that 99 percent of iPhone users are unaware of the features which iPhone offers. They
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bought
this to
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get
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social
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status
from society.
Currently
, we are living in an era that, our
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qualities
can
be measured
in terms of our physical luxury items.

While
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respect
becomes materialized in this era,
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many
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people
fund that it is better to provide
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respect
according to their
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qualities
. Experience
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makes
a perfect
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man
,
hence
an experienced person can teach food
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qualities
the
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current
generation. Soft
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skills
are generated
or inherited from our parents
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so
it
is recommended
to give
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respect
to
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people
who
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own
hear,
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respect
and trust, then
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only
they can teach
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good
morals to the
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current
generation.
In other words
,
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some
properties that we cannot
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buy
from the market
rather
than it
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must
be
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got
from the experience by respecting
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people
who
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own
this
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quality
we are
directly
or
indirectly
inherit these
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qualities
.
For example
, a report appears in a Sunday magazine state that 56 percentage f
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people
who have an interest in the personal characters than
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material
things can accomplish their goals. Something is precious in the world fund it and obtain it.

In Conclusion
, personalities may vary
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some
may have a focus on their
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material
things that can bring
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respect
rather
than personal
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qualities
. In my opinion personal, features such as
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honour
, trust, kindness will
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help
for the existence of the world.
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IELTS essay 4. Using the examples of the peanut bug and the morpho butterfly, explain the concept of revealing coloration. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
373 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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