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describe something expensive you have bought for yourself

describe something expensive you have bought for yourself YyaOB
The most expensive that i bought for myself is iphone airpod that i bought it as amazon site and i bought it to make my soul happy. I know you think its crazy or something like that but we have to do something for ourselves because we live one time and we have to do something to makes ourselves happy and show we are important for ourselves. As all teenagers i love music and i use my airpod all night to find calm and make my brain my body my soul rest. If i want to talk about feeling when i bought it, i have to say iam like a five years old kid who their parents bought them a toy which is he/she like it so much. I mean im so happy and proud my self because i bought it from my own money.
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airpod
that
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amazon
site and
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bought
it to
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make
my soul happy. I know you
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its crazy or something like that
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but
we
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have to
do something for ourselves
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because
we
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live
one
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have to
do something to
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makes
ourselves happy and
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show
we are
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important
for ourselves.

As all
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teenagers
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love
music and
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use
my
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airpod
all night to find calm and
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make
my brain my body my soul rest.

If
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want to talk about feeling when
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have to
say
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iam
like a five years
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kid who their parents
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bought
them a toy which is he/she like it
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so
much. I mean
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im
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happy and proud my self
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because
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bought
it from my
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IELTS essay describe something expensive you have bought for yourself

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
145 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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