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if a product is good and meets coustmors needs then people buy it and adversity is unnessary . what extend do you agree or disagree

if a product is good and meets coustmors needs then people buy it and adversity is unnessary. what extend MmAm9
although, advertisement plays a vital and huge role in selling of a goods but if a product is a requirement of one's so, they do not need a advertisement. This essay will agree with the statement but I will also discuss some disagreement point. firstly, people decry that advertisement is important for selling a product. Because with the help of announcement people can buy that product by knowing the full positive and negative points. it become easy to buy at that time when one can have proper knowledge about that product. On the other hand, though a advertisement is a promotion of a product but if a product is a need then it does not need any announcement. For instance, pulses and vegetable are a requirement so, people can buy without any promotion. There are many applications where one can buy vegetable and pulses still there is no promotion to buy vegetable of good quality. Secondly, some product do not need to advertise. Nevertheless, there are wide range of things and products which need promotion. For example, television and mobile need advertisement for new offers and sales related to product. Certainly, many individuals have television but with the help of promotion one can know about the new features about that product. To the contrary, in the ancient times, when there was no advertisement then people used product which was in the market in that time. Announcement do not have a full truth in its promotion so that is why they make fake promises to the consumers as well as individuals buy many unnecessary things by watching the advertisement. In conclusion, there are many product which need promotions but some product do not need any advertisement to sell which are the basic need of consumer
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is
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.
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of announcement
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by knowing the full
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positive
and
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points.
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buy
at that time when one can have proper knowledge about that
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product
.
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, though
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a
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advertisement
is a promotion of a
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product
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if a
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product
is a
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then it does not
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any announcement.
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, pulses and vegetable are a requirement
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,
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people
can
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buy
without any promotion. There are
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applications where one can
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buy
vegetable and pulses
still
there is no promotion to
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buy
vegetable of
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good
quality.
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,
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product
do not
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need
to advertise.
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, there are wide range of things and
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products
which
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need
promotion.
For example
, television and mobile
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need
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advertisement
for new offers and sales related to
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product
.
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,
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many
individuals have television
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with the
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of promotion one can know about the new features about that
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product
. To the contrary, in the ancient times, when there was no
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then
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people
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which was in the market in that time. Announcement do not have a full truth in its promotion
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so
that is
why they
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fake promises to the consumers
as well
as individuals
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buy
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many
unnecessary things by watching the
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.
In conclusion
, there are
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product
which
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need
promotions
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some
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product
do not
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need
any
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to sell which are the basic
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need
of
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consumer
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IELTS essay if a product is good and meets coustmors needs then people buy it and adversity is unnessary. what extend

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