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Are we too dependent on computers? Write a essay to explain your thoughts

Are we too dependent on computers? Write a essay to explain your thoughts KnOW0
Yes, because many everyday skills have been lost due to the use of computers and other technology. I have had this argument many times with people. Because of computers and smart phones, too many people can’t think for themselves. They can’t decide what restaurant they want to go to without pulling up a search engine. They can’t add 2 + 2 because they always have their handy computer calculator to do the work for them. They can’t manage their own time, because their computer schedule is what keeps them in order. In today’s society, we are too dependent on computers. People are losing their ability to function without a computer. Memorization is a thing of the past, we now depend on our cell phones to have the phone number of everyone we know and we no longer can even remember the phone number of our parents or children. We no longer worry about what we are writing or typing because we all use a word processing program that has spellchecker and checks for grammar mistakes. So as you can see we depend on computers too much and are losing our ability to memorize, type, spell, or even write a grammatical correct sentence. We are way too dependent on computers today; most businesses are not able to run without a computer anymore. My belief that everybody somewhere somehow has to use a computer for what they are doing. Most businesses are run on computers or even by computers. Banking is now done on computers along with credit apps and even car and movie rentals. If we lost the use of computers at this point in time, our world would come to a screeching halt. Stocks would crash; gas pumps and credit card machines would go down. The dependency on computers is also an extreme risk to the way that businesses and lives are run. Some people are even addicted, having to be on the computer all the time. These reasons are why I think that we are too dependent on computers. If we lose computers we end up in chaos. It is important to properly understand what being too dependent is. If we say that too dependent means that if we lose it in an instant then we are completely screwed and end up in chaos, then sure, we’re too dependent on computers. However, does the concept of too dependent even exist? Is it even possible to be too dependent on something? But the way I see dependence, we are too dependent.
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everyday
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skills
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been lost
due to the
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of computers and other technology. I have had this argument
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many
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of computers and smart
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, too
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for themselves. They
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decide what restaurant they want to go to without pulling up a search engine. They
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can’t
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add
2 + 2
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because
they always have their handy computer calculator to do the work for them.
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They
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can’t
manage their
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own
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time
,
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because
their computer schedule is what
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keeps
them in order.

In
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today
’s society, we are too
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dependent
on computers.
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People
are losing their ability to function without a computer. Memorization is a thing of the past, we
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now
depend on our cell
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phones
to have the
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phone
number of everyone we
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know and
we no longer can even remember the
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phone
number of our parents or children. We no longer worry about what we are writing or typing
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because
we all
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use
a word processing program that has spellchecker and
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checks
for grammar mistakes.
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as you can
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we depend on computers too much and are losing our ability to memorize, type, spell, or even write a grammatical correct sentence.

We are way too
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dependent
on computers
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today
; most businesses are not able to run without a computer anymore. My belief that everybody somewhere somehow
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has to
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use
a computer for what they are doing. Most businesses
are run
on computers or even by computers. Banking is
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now
done on computers along with credit apps and even car and movie rentals. If we lost the
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use
of computers at this point in
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time
, our world would
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come
to a screeching halt. Stocks would crash; gas pumps and credit card machines would go down. The dependency on computers is
also
an extreme
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risk
to the way that businesses and
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lives
are run
.
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Some
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people
are even addicted, having to be on the computer all the
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time
. These reasons are why I
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think
that we are too
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dependent
on computers.

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If
we lose computers we
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end
up in chaos. It is
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important
to
properly
understand what being too
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dependent
is. If we say that too
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dependent
means that if we lose it in an instant then we are completely screwed and
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end
up in chaos, then sure, we’re too
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dependent
on computers.
However
, does the concept of too
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dependent
even exist? Is it even possible to be too
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dependent
on something?
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But
the way I
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dependence, we are too
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IELTS essay Are we too dependent on computers? Write a essay to explain your thoughts

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
421 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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