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IELTS Academic Writing TaskWRITING TASK 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advan v.2

IELTS Academic Writing TaskWRITING TASK 2 In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advan v. 2
It is a worldwide phenomenon that many people travel to different countries for the purpose of higher education. This was not possible and less occurring in the past mainly due to lack of knowledge about foreign countries, and expensive travel and cost of studies. However, the globalisation and the revolution in information technology has made it possible today that many people are benefitting from the quality education from universities. Arguments can be made in favour of study in foreign countries. However, we need to be mindful that there are many critics to such patterns. First of all, opportunity to receive quality education is one of the most important benefits of going to foreign university. This is so true in case of students from poor and developing nations where there is hardly any infrastructure and investment in good universities, colleges, and research centres. Secondly, when students enrol in the foreign universities, they can use their time in understanding cultures, customs and traditions of another country and of other students. It augurs well when young students learn to respect other cultures and languages. As said before, there are plenty of negative consequences of joining foreign universities. A country which is already poor loses a lot of foreign currency reserves when a student travels to another country. Prospective graduate and undergraduate candidate has to spend a lot of money for his college admission, for hostel, for books in another country and this could be detrimental to poor country’s economy. The second disadvantage of studying in international universities for anyone is that he or she is not able to gain the required amount of knowledge of his home country and there could be some difficulty to work in his or her country when they return. Therefore, in my conclusion, I would like to state that education in foreign country is not without demerits and each individual should make his own assessment with regard to what is best for him.
It is a worldwide phenomenon that
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many
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people
travel to
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different
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countries
for the purpose of higher
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education
. This was not possible and less occurring in the past
mainly
due to lack of knowledge about
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foreign
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countries
, and expensive travel and cost of studies.
However
, the
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globalisation
and the revolution in information technology has made it possible
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today
that
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many
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people
are
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benefitting
from the quality
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education
from universities.

Arguments can
be made
in
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favour
of study in
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foreign
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countries
.
However
, we need to be mindful that there are
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many
critics to such patterns.
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First of all
, opportunity to receive quality
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education
is one of the most
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important
benefits of going to
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foreign
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university
. This is
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so
true in case of
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students
from poor and developing nations where there is hardly any infrastructure and investment in
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good
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universities
, colleges, and research
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centres
.
Secondly
, when
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students
enrol in the
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foreign
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universities
, they can
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use
their time in understanding cultures, customs and traditions of another
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country
and of other
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students
. It augurs well when young
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students
learn to respect other cultures and languages.

As said
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before
, there are
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plenty
of
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negative
consequences of joining
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foreign
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universities
. A
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country
which is already poor loses
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a lot of
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foreign
currency reserves when a
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student
travels to another
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country
. Prospective graduate and undergraduate candidate
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has to
spend
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a lot of
money for his college admission, for hostel, for books in another
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country
and this could be detrimental to poor
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country’s
economy. The second disadvantage of studying in international
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universities
for anyone is that he or she is not able to gain the required amount of knowledge of his home
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country
and there could be
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some
difficulty to work in
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his or her
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country
when they return.

Therefore
, in my conclusion, I would like to state that
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education
in
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foreign
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country
is not without demerits and each individual should
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make
his
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own
assessment with regard to what is best for him.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay IELTS Academic Writing TaskWRITING TASK 2 In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advan v. 2

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4 paragraphs
325 words
5.5
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