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Without a doubt, traffic becomes a huge issues that affects many countries around the world. A number of human beings believes this peoplem can be solved by moving from the villiges and state into the cities, but I think this is not a good idea, because if they moved their places no one will be living in the country side. These days, the govenment tries to develpe his countries by building a new roads and bridges, so this way is helpfull in decreasing the number of cars in the roads. In addition, there are may countires which are using asingles to drow up the number of cars. Singles is helpful as it facilitates the humans' movements from one place to another. In contrast, although there are a few number of people who are living in the the suburbs, but also these twons needed a services to helpe people in doing their daily life in the easy way. For instance, the governmenta can provid them a flash lights. Moreover, if government made to expand the parking of car this will help people how are living in these small towns or villages to feel confortable. Finally, I prefer to life in the city, because their we can find alot of services and the life there is better than living in the suburbs.

Without a doubt, traffic becomes a huge Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "issue"?issue
issues
 that affects This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 countries around the world. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of human beings believes this Possible spelling mistake found.peoplepeoplespeopledpeople m
peoplem
 can be solved
 by moving from the Possible spelling mistake found.villages
villiges
 and state into the cities, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this is not a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 if they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 their places no one will be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 in the country side.

These days, the Possible spelling mistake found.government
govenment
 tries to Possible spelling mistake found.developeddevelopdeveloperdevelopsdevolvedevalue
develpe
 his countries by building a new roads and bridges, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 this way is Possible spelling mistake found.helpfulhelpfullyhelp fullhelpful l
helpfull
 in decreasing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of cars in the roads.

In addition
, there are may Possible spelling mistake found.countriescounties
countires
 which are using Possible spelling mistake found.singlesa singles
asingles
 to Possible spelling mistake found.drawdropgrowdrewrowDrew
drow
 up the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of cars. Singles is helpful as it facilitates the humans' movements from one place to another.

In contrast
, although there are a few You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 in Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 suburbs, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 these Possible spelling mistake found.townstonstwinstwostrons
twons
 needed Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a service" or simply "services"?a serviceservices
a services
 to Possible spelling mistake found.helphelpedhelpshelperhelvehelp e
helpe
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in doing their daily life in the easy way. For instance
, the Possible spelling mistake found.governmentgovernmentsgovernmentalgovernment a
governmenta
 can Possible spelling mistake found.provideprovedprov id
provid
 them a flash lights.

Moreover
, if This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 made to expand the parking of car this will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 how are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 in these This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 towns or villages to feel Possible spelling mistake found.comfortableconformable
confortable
.

Finally
, I prefer to life in the city, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 their we can find Possible spelling mistake found.a lotlotplotslotaltoaloft
alot
 of services and the life there is better than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 in the suburbs. 