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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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The impressive development in energy fields arose the debate to whether humanity should ban the usage of fossil-fuel cars and replace them with electric cars or not. I believe that the world should start adopting the usage of cars that are electrically fuelled because of several reasons. One of which is that this kind of cars is environmentally friendly unlike those powered by fossil fuels. While the second reason is the fact that fossil fuels sources are driven to extinction. Cars that burn fossil fuels, to provide them with energy, emit a huge amount of pollutants to the surrounding environment. These greenhouse gases ascend to the atmosphere causing a severe damage to the ozone layer, allowing UV radiations to reach the earth’s surface. These emissions adversely affect humans whether in a direct or indirect way. The former is by inhaling these pollutants which in return cause different lung diseases in the long term. While the latter would be the negative effects of the harmful rays entering the ozone layer. Several researches have shown that a considerable percentage of the greenhouse gases are resulted by cars which are sourced by fossil fuel, hence, contributing in the diminishing of the ozone layer. Another argument that should be considered is the limited life span of fossil fuels sources. It is known that fossil fuels are unrenewable resources, meaning that there is a specific reserve that will not last forever. For such a reason, people should develop alternative sources for energy to power their cars rather than depending on impermanent resource. Scientists stated that the remaining reserve of fossil fuels will extinct within a century. Hence, humanity should start using what is left wisely, and try their best to use different types of energy whenever possible. In conclusion, I think that the less dependant we are on fossil fuel, the healthier our environment gets and the more sustainable our energy supply becomes.
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fields arose the debate to whether humanity should ban the usage of fossil-fuel
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cars
and replace them with electric
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cars
or not. I believe that the world should
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start
adopting the usage of
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cars
that are
electrically
fuelled
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because
of several reasons. One of which is that this kind of
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cars
is
environmentally
friendly unlike those powered by
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fossil
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fuels
.
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While
the second reason is the fact that
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fossil
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fuels
sources
are driven
to extinction.

Cars that burn
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fossil
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fuels
, to provide them with
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energy
, emit a huge amount of pollutants to the surrounding environment. These greenhouse gases ascend to the atmosphere causing
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a severe damage
to the ozone layer, allowing UV radiations to reach the earth’s surface. These emissions
adversely
affect humans whether in a direct or indirect way. The former is by inhaling these pollutants which in return cause
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different
lung diseases in the long term.
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the latter would be the
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negative
effects of the harmful rays entering the ozone layer. Several researches have shown that a considerable percentage of the greenhouse gases
are resulted
by
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cars
which
are sourced
by
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fossil
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fuel
,
hence
, contributing in the diminishing of the ozone layer.

Another argument that should
be considered
is the limited life span of
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fossil
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fuels
sources. It
is known
that
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fossil
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fuels
are
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unrenewable
resources, meaning that there is a specific reserve that will not last forever. For such a reason,
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people
should develop alternative sources for
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energy
to power their
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cars
rather
than depending on impermanent resource. Scientists stated that the remaining reserve of
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fossil
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fuels
will extinct within a century.
Hence
, humanity should
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start
using what is
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left
wisely
, and try their best to
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use
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different
types of
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energy
whenever possible.

In conclusion
, I
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think
that the less
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dependant
we are on
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fossil
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fuel
, the healthier our environment
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gets
and the more sustainable our
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energy
supply becomes.
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IELTS essay All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.

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