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identifies and explains how selected texts represents an inspirational person that has overcome adversity and explain how the text influences reader’s perception of the human experience that to create different perspectives of identity, place and events inspire or are inspirational.

identifies and explains how selected texts represents an inspirational person that has overcome adversity and explain how the text influences reader’s perception of the human experience that to create different perspectives of identity, place and events inspire or are inspirational. 15kEN
Inspiration awakens us to new possibilities by enabling us to transcend our ordinary experiences and limitations. It creates a passion within us, that is very difficult to extinguish. It’s quite remarkable because “at times our own light goes out and is rekindled by a spark from another person. Each one of us has cause to think deep gratitude of those who have lighted the flame with us”— Albert Schweitzer. The qualities of an inspirational person surely that they are resilient to overcome adversity, but today Anne Frank is the inspirational girl I'll honour in my blog. Her life challenge, identities, and actions are the one inspires people. The experience of Anne‘s life shows adversities she challenged –fears, discrimination, suffer and injustice –but is an inspiration. In 1933, the Nazi came to power, Anne and her family moved from Germany to Holland. She attended a regular school until Holland was occupied by the Nazis in 1940. Anne was subjected to the same rules as German Jews, and Jewish children could only attend Jewish schools. She had to face curfews and was forced to wear a yellow star shirt symbol. She moved to a hiding house called the "Secret Annex" but was eventually discovered by the Nazi. The Nazis then sent Anne to a concentration camp in 1945, and it was the final challenge Anne had. Her story was heartbreaking, but her identities are inspired. She's optimistic, mature, and resilient. During the journey, Anne wrote her diary said, “so much has happened, it’s as if the world has suddenly turned upside down. But as you can see, Kitty, I’m still alive” (on Wednesday the 8th of July 1942). Three days later when she was hiding she said, “It’s more like being on holiday in some strange pension. ” Although Ann had faced threats and dangers, she had a positive attitude and valued her life. She left her normal childhood behind and entered the desperate conditions of the Holocaust; she became much more thoughtful and reflective. It indicates she is a resilient person to overcome the adversity with her optimist and mature mindset. That is what inspires us to be strong and to keep going in our miserable lives. Nothing can truly let you down, but your own self! Anne’s inspiring actions were basically because of her identities. However, she was discriminated against and hunted by the Nazis, but she kept writing her journal and never abandoned her dream of publishing the diary. Her none excuses inspiring people who have given up on their dreams. Suzy Kassem — 'Fear kills more dreams than failure ever will. The author uses language features of quotations, triples, selected adjectives, as well as structures such as cause and effect, and punctuation in the text to shape meaning and invite particular responses. The quote "Dear Kitty" and positive adjectives of "outspoken, " "energetic, ” and “incredibly" strengthen readers feeling to association with Anne Frank’s positive identity – Innocent, enthusiastic and smart. On the other hand, the used of "short" and "universal" adjectives for the problems Anne Frank was facing are used to negatively represent the Anne’s situation. The author then reinforces it through the technique of Triplets, "Fear, boredom and confusion” which describes Anne's experience written in her diary. The cause and effect of “When Holland was occupied by the Nazis in 1940, their heritage puts the family under threat” shows a clue of how Nazis' mindset towards. Anne Frank herself written in her diary said that the hiding place “may be damp and lopsided, but there’s probably not a more comfortable hiding house in all of Amsterdam. No, in all of Holland. ” This comprehended the writer's ideas that nowhere during the event were safe since the Nazis came into power, which evokes an unpleasant, anger, and disappointed feeling towards the Nazis, representing their negative identity and Holocaust event. The selected texts further invite readers to examine how it underpins texts and shape representations of Nazis perspectives, ideas, cultural assumption, values and beliefs towards Jews. As the author has revealed that Anne Frank's family had been "subjected" to the same rules as German Jews, were forced to wear a "yellow star" shirt, could only attend "Jewish school, " and Jewish people were not allowed to have their own business. This suggests that the Nazis have a negative attitude of an unwelcome and/or disgusted towards Jewish people because of whom they are. It is also clear that the Nazis treated Jews unfairly regardless of human equality and shows that they believed that Jewish was a treat due to their different race in German. The text, therefore, represents negative identify, place, and concept of Nazi as brutal and unacceptable in a modern society, where unfair threaten and discriminatory actions are unexpected and is against to the laws –Rights of equality and non-discrimination. By all accounts, and for proven reasons, it is no wonder that selected texts represent Anne Frank inspirational who overcome adversity. Anne Frank is an optimist, mature and resilient character. Her time at a young age was full of dreams, strength, enthusiasm, fun and love. But immediately she enters this War, she must endure misery, suffer, and fear. Still, she walked through any kind of disaster and shone through within herself. Her brightness have lightened millions of people to get pass through their darkness when their light goes out. Therefore, the text influences reader’s perception of human experience of discrimination, cultural assumption and stereotypes to create Anne’s identities and actions that are inspirational. After thorough analysis on this subject, the Nazis or the Holocaust killed millions of Jews, and that it wounded generations to never forget, but to pray the event will never happen again. In view of the fact that discrimination was part of the story, people with humanity will never deny any other human right. In a state of war, thousands of innocent people had suffered from what they had not begun.
Inspiration awakens us to new possibilities by enabling us to transcend our ordinary
experiences
and limitations. It creates a passion within us,
that is
very
difficult to extinguish. It’s quite remarkable
because
“at times our
own
light goes out and
is rekindled
by a spark from another person. Each one of us has cause to
think
deep gratitude of those who have lighted the flame with us”— Albert Schweitzer. The qualities of an
inspirational
person
surely
that they are
resilient
to overcome
adversity
,
but
today
Anne Frank is the
inspirational
girl I'll
honour
in my blog. Her life challenge,
identities
, and actions are the one inspires
people
.

The
experience
of Anne‘s life
shows
adversities
she challenged –fears, discrimination, suffer and injustice –
but
is an inspiration. In 1933, the
Nazi
came to power, Anne and her family
moved
from Germany to Holland. She attended a regular school until Holland
was occupied
by the
Nazis
in 1940. Anne
was subjected
to the same
rules
as German Jews, and Jewish children could
only
attend Jewish schools. She had to face curfews and
was forced
to wear a yellow star shirt symbol. She
moved
to a hiding
house
called the
"
Secret Annex
"
but
was
eventually
discovered by the
Nazi
. The
Nazis
then
sent
Anne to a concentration camp in 1945, and it was the
final


challenge
Anne had. Her story was heartbreaking,
but
her
identities
are inspired
. She's optimistic, mature, and
resilient
. During the journey, Anne wrote her
diary
said, “
so
much has happened, it’s as if the world has
suddenly
turned upside down.
But
as you can
see
, Kitty, I’m
still
alive” (on Wednesday the 8th of July 1942). Three days later when she was hiding she said, “It’s more like being on holiday in
some
strange pension. ” Although Ann had faced threats and
dangers
, she had a
positive
attitude and valued her life. She
left
her normal childhood behind and entered the desperate conditions of the Holocaust; she became much more thoughtful and reflective. It indicates she is a
resilient
person to overcome the
adversity
with her optimist and mature mindset.
That is
what inspires us to be strong and to
keep
going in our miserable
lives
. Nothing can
truly
let
you down,
but
your
own
self! Anne’s inspiring actions were
basically
because
of her
identities
.
However
, she
was discriminated
against and hunted by the
Nazis
,
but
she
kept
writing her journal and never abandoned her
dream
of publishing the
diary
. Her none excuses inspiring
people
who have
given
up on their
dreams
. Suzy
Kassem
— 'Fear kills more
dreams
than failure ever will.

The author
uses
language features of quotations, triples, selected adjectives,
as well
as structures such as cause and effect, and punctuation in the
text
to shape meaning and invite particular responses. The quote
"
Dear Kitty
"
and
positive
adjectives of
"
outspoken,
"
"
energetic,
and “
incredibly
"
strengthen readers feeling to association with Anne Frank’s
positive
identity
Innocent, enthusiastic and smart.
On the other hand
, the
used
of
"
short
"
and
"
universal
"
adjectives for the problems Anne Frank was facing are
used
to
negatively
represent the Anne’s situation. The author then reinforces it
through
the technique of Triplets,
"
Fear, boredom and confusion” which
describes
Anne's
experience
written in her
diary
. The cause and effect of “When Holland
was occupied
by the
Nazis
in 1940, their heritage puts the family under threat”
shows
a clue of how Nazis' mindset towards. Anne Frank herself written in her
diary
said that the hiding place “may be damp and lopsided,
but
there’s
probably
not a more comfortable hiding
house
in all of Amsterdam. No, in all of Holland. ” This comprehended the writer's
ideas
that nowhere during the
event
were safe since the
Nazis
came into power, which evokes an unpleasant, anger, and disappointed feeling towards the
Nazis
, representing their
negative
identity
and Holocaust
event
.

The selected
texts
further
invite readers to examine how it underpins
texts
and shape representations of
Nazis
perspectives,
ideas
, cultural assumption, values and beliefs towards Jews. As the author has revealed that Anne Frank's family had been
"
subjected
"
to the same
rules
as German Jews,
were forced
to wear a
"
yellow star
"
shirt, could
only
attend
"
Jewish school,
"
and Jewish
people
were not
allowed
to have their
own
business. This suggests that the
Nazis
have a
negative
attitude of an unwelcome and/or disgusted towards Jewish
people
because
of whom they are. It is
also
clear
that the
Nazis
treated Jews
unfairly
regardless of human equality and
shows
that they believed that Jewish was a treat due to their
different
race in German. The
text
,
therefore
, represents
negative
identify, place, and concept of
Nazi
as brutal and unacceptable in a modern society, where unfair threaten and discriminatory actions
are unexpected
and is against to the laws –Rights of equality and non-discrimination.

By all accounts, and for proven reasons, it is no wonder that selected
texts
represent Anne Frank
inspirational
who overcome
adversity
. Anne Frank is an optimist, mature and
resilient
character. Her time at a young age was full of
dreams
, strength, enthusiasm, fun and
love
.
But
immediately she enters
this


War, she
must
endure misery, suffer, and fear.
Still
, she walked
through
any kind of disaster and shone
through
within herself. Her brightness have lightened millions of
people
to
get
pass
through
their darkness when their light goes out.
Therefore
, the
text
influences reader’s perception of human
experience
of discrimination, cultural assumption and stereotypes to create Anne’s
identities
and actions that are
inspirational
. After thorough analysis on this subject, the
Nazis
or the Holocaust killed millions of Jews, and that it wounded generations to never forget,
but
to pray the
event
will never happen again. In view of the fact that discrimination was part of the story,
people
with humanity will never deny any other human right. In a state of war, thousands of innocent
people
had suffered from what they had not begun.
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IELTS essay identifies and explains how selected texts represents an inspirational person that has overcome adversity and explain how the text influences reader’s perception of the human experience that to create different perspectives of identity, place and events inspire or are inspirational.

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7 paragraphs
987 words
5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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