Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

As global trade increases ,many daily necessities are produced in other countries

As global trade increases, many daily necessities are produced in other countries xmaE9

Many essential items are imported for local consumption from very long distance from countries all over the world cause of the globalisation. International trade is increasing tremendously every day, since the nations depends on other countries to produce all items. In my opinion, the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages. Firstly, globalised trade helps each country to optimise the use of natural resources and a production of goods depends upon the country’s richness. This enables a country to obtain goods which it cannot produce or which is not producing due to higher costs. For example, Not all countries can extract oil, India export crude oil, petrol and other fuels from Dubai since it best suited in that country. Secondly, Low cost because of different labour management, thereby boosting the country’s economy. It equalises the price throughout the world, as we do not have to bargain for the items. Take for example, apple phone’s price is same all over the world, even if converts it into dollars or rupees. Finally, more employment opportunities in turn resulted in a step toward the country's prosperity. Although, there are aforementioned mentioned merits above, there are a few disadvantages associated with international trade. Firstly, cold trade war exists in between some countries, there has been an ongoing trade war between the US and China for quite a long time. Although it affects the transportation only between these two countries, few believe that it should not pave the way for the other nation’s conflict. Secondly, the products manufacturer does not comply with safety and health measures for the items export policy. If chemicals and preservatives are used in our foods, fruits or vegetable only to keep them fresh even after a long journey and propagated time, that would be dangerous for our health. Some of our daily necessities are coming from countries where minimal hygiene is not maintained and eating those food items might be perilous for us. Even though, globalised trade has above-mentioned shortcomings that can be prevented by implementing tighter laws and regulations. To conclude, I quite support the idea of transporting the essential goods from different countries because the merits are more than demerits.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 essential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
are imported
 for local consumption from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 long distance from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 all over the world cause of the Possible spelling mistake. 'globalisation' is British English.globalization
globalisation
. International You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommercetransactiondealbusinessexchangeindustry
trade
 is increasing tremendously
 every day, since the nations depends on other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 to produce all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
. In my opinion, the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.

Firstly
, Possible spelling mistake. 'globalised' is British English.globalized
globalised
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommercetransactiondealbusinessexchangeindustry
trade
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 to Possible spelling mistake. 'optimise' is British English.optimize
optimise
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of natural resources and a production of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 depends upon the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country’s
 richness. This enables a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 to obtain This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 which it cannot produce or which is not producing due to higher costs. For example
, Not all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 can extract oil, India export crude oil, petrol and other fuels from Dubai since it best suited in that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
. Secondly
, Low cost This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Possible spelling mistake. 'labour' is British English.labor
labour
 management, thereby boosting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country’s
 economy. It Possible spelling mistake. 'equalises' is British English.equalizes
equalises
 the price throughout the world, as we do not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 bargain for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
. Take for example
, apple phone’s price is same all over the world, even if converts it into dollars or rupees. Finally
, more employment opportunities in turn resulted in a step toward the country's prosperity.

Although, there are aforementioned
 mentioned merits above, there are a few disadvantages associated with international You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommercetransactiondealbusinessexchangeindustry
trade
. Firstly
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommercetransactiondealbusinessexchangeindustry
trade
 war exists in between This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
, there has been an ongoing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommercetransactiondealbusinessexchangeindustry
trade
 war between the US and China for quite a long time. Although it affects the transportation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 between these two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
, few believe that it should not pave the way for the other nation’s conflict. Secondly
, the Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "products'" or "product's"?products'product's
products
 manufacturer does not comply with safety and health measures for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 export policy. If chemicals and preservatives are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in our foods, fruits or vegetable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 them fresh even after a long journey and propagated time, that would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 for our health. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 of our daily necessities are coming from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 where minimal hygiene is not maintained and eating those food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinformationcomponentfeatureelementthingpiece
items
 might be perilous for us.

Even though
, Possible spelling mistake. 'globalised' is British English.globalized
globalised
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommercetransactiondealbusinessexchangeindustry
trade
 has above-mentioned shortcomings that can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precluded
prevented
 by implementing tighter laws and regulations. To conclude
, I quite support the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of transporting the essential This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the merits are more than demerits. 