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What are some goals you have failed to accomplish?

What are some goals you have failed to accomplish? BJ9Jj
I have failed two things to accomplish. The first thing is that I failed to get an ielts score which I targeted. I set my goal to get an overall 7. 0 but I got only overall 6. 0. The time I got the test, I was able to study maximum 3 hours a day for 4 months because I had to do work. The period was not enough to study all sections; reading, speaking, listening and writing. So I failed to get the score which I wanted to get. The second thing is that I failed to get a job from Korean embassy. I failed a final step, an interview, at the Korean embassy although I passed the second steps of procedure. I don't know why I failed to get a job as they didn’t tell me a reason why I left off.
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, I was able to study maximum 3 hours a day for 4 months
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I had to do work. The period was not
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to study all sections; reading, speaking, listening and writing.
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the score which I wanted to
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. The second thing is that I
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to
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a job from Korean embassy. I
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a final step, an interview, at the Korean embassy although I passed the second steps of procedure. I don't know why I
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to
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a job as they didn’t
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IELTS essay What are some goals you have failed to accomplish?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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