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I would say that my current job at Stelia, a company that builds airplanes, was not that interesting because I'm currently working remotely.

I would say that my current job at Stelia, a company that builds airplanes, was not that interesting because I'm currently working remotely. EqqxQ
I would say that my current job at Stelia, a company that builds airplanes, was not that interesting because I'm currently working remotely. However, working from home could be a perfect situation. It's really different to have a stable work where I cannot allow myself to be absent for a least 3 weeks. As of now, I'm starting my work at 7 a. m. and finished at 3 p. m. daily. What is convenient for me working here was the distance from my home - only 15 minutes by car. My duties were not that challenging enough because I just had to make sure that all female washrooms were clean as well as the cafeteria. 19% of employees here were men while 6% were women. My boss only visit the office once a month and my salary for cleaning was not that bad compared to other professional jobs here in Canada. Also, I normally travel twice a year - one of which will be this coming February 2022. All I want is just to have a stable job so that I can work continuously and eventually increase my savings.
I would say that my
current
job at
Stelia
, a
company
that builds airplanes, was not that interesting
because
I'm
currently
working
remotely
.
However
, working from home could be a perfect situation. It's
really
different
to have a stable work where I cannot
allow
myself to be absent for
a
least 3 weeks. As of
now
, I'm starting my work at 7 a. m. and finished at 3 p. m. daily. What is convenient for me working here was the distance from my home
-
only
15 minutes by car. My duties were not that challenging
enough
because
I
just
had to
make
sure that all female washrooms were clean
as well
as the cafeteria. 19% of employees here were
men
while 6% were women. My boss
only
visit the office once a month and my salary for cleaning was not that
bad
compared to other professional jobs here in Canada.

Also
, I
normally
travel twice a year
-
one of which will be this coming February 2022. All I want is
just
to have a stable job
so
that I can work
continuously
and
eventually
increase my savings.
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IELTS essay I would say that my current job at Stelia, a company that builds airplanes, was not that interesting because I'm currently working remotely.

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