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Invention has changed you life

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The invention that has changed my life is my computer. All the time I spend my laptop. I am studying, gaming and watching media in my computer. Before I was use to laptop, I has spent all day in font of my phone. I'm on my computer at least 12 hours a day. It helps me with my studies and it entertains when I am bore or tired. Surfing the Internet is my hobby. I am always looking something or on either Facebook, Messenger, . . . In the future will be a better invention than computer, like, artificial intelligence. It will suppose me everything I want, for example It will give solution in my work, my school, etc. . .

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