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What are the causes and effects of having unhealthy diets?

What are the causes and effects of having unhealthy diets? peewm
Over the past few years, advancement in technology has made human life easy and more comfortable; however, it has made some detrimental impact on people's life such as they tend to eat unhealthy food. Unhealthy diets can be harmful and have long-term effects on your health. There are a range of reasons and also many tremendous impacts of having unhealthy diets. Unfortunately, a lot of people maintain bad eating habits, such as going for “cheap” options – such as fast foods, canned goods, etc. This is due to the lack of time to prepare a healthy meal and the increasing number of fast food available. Nowadays people are spending more time at work and it has been difficult for them to find time to prepare their own meals. As a result, they end up buying frozen meals that are high in fat and there are fewer nutrients that directly affect their diet. In addition, the increasing number of fast-food chains is attracting more people to consume unhealthy food. The effects of unhealthy eating can sometimes lead to obvious physical changes, such as acne, bloating, poor digestion, weight gain. Certain unhealthy diets, like those linked to too much fast food, can result in obesity and related diseases. It can also increase your risk of chronic diseases, such as diabetes and heart disease, osteoarthritis, and impact your mental health. Having unhealthy meals add to stress and depression, causing us to have mood swings as well To sum up, it is evident that there are several causes of having unhealthy diets, and a variety of negative effects; consequently, educating people to have a healthy lifestyle is vital for every country in the world. .
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diets can be harmful and have long-term effects on your health. There are a range of reasons and
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available. Nowadays
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The effects of
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eating can
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diets, like those linked to too much
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, can result in obesity and related diseases. It can
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of chronic diseases, such as diabetes and heart disease, osteoarthritis, and impact your mental health. Having
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diets, and a variety of
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to have a healthy lifestyle is vital for every country in the world.
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IELTS essay What are the causes and effects of having unhealthy diets?

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