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I would like to start off by introducing a bed, a must-have furniture in anyone’s home.

I would like to start off by introducing a bed, a must-have furniture in anyone’s home. pRKay
I would like to start off by introducing my trip to Phu Quoc, a breathtaking, peaceful island in the southern part of Vietnam. If my memory serves me right, I had a thirst for adventure when I was a kid, so my family bought me a flight ticket to travel. Currently, I could hardly contain my excitement when I know that my family is about to visit that place again. Down the road, I hope that I could set aside more time and money to have such a trip with my girlfriend. Phu Quoc is a tourist attraction which is well-known for their fish sauce. The people who reside on this island are friendly and generous. There are actually two parts of this island, one of which belongs to VinGroup, a big corporation in Vietnam, the other where civilians live is quite underdeveloped. There is nothing better than hiring bikes to explore the island as I please, because I want to get off the beaten track. If I could describe this location in one word, that would be “amazing”. All in all, it was such a holiday of a lifetime, and I am looking forward to coming back to Phu Quoc in the future.
I would like to
start
off by introducing my trip to
Phu
Quoc
, a breathtaking, peaceful
island
in the southern part of Vietnam.

If my memory serves me right, I had a thirst for adventure when I was a kid,
so
my family
bought
me a flight ticket to travel.

Currently
, I could hardly contain my excitement when I know that my family is about to visit that place again.

Down the road, I hope that I could set aside more time and money to have such a trip with my girlfriend.

Phu
Quoc
is a tourist attraction which is well-known for their fish sauce.

The
people
who reside on this
island
are friendly and generous.

There are actually two parts of this
island
, one of which belongs to
VinGroup
, a
big
corporation in Vietnam, the other where civilians
live
is quite underdeveloped.

There is nothing better than hiring bikes to explore the
island
as I
please
,
because
I want to
get
off the beaten
track
.

If I could
describe
this location in one word, that would be “amazing”.

All in all, it was such a holiday of a lifetime, and I am looking forward to coming back to
Phu
Quoc
in the future.
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IELTS essay I would like to start off by introducing a bed, a must-have furniture in anyone’s home.

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  American English
10 paragraphs
204 words
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