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I would like to have this opportunity to introduce myself as Kushal Parecha

I would like to have this opportunity to introduce myself as Kushal Parecha peA0L
I would like to have this opportunity to introduce myself as Kushal Parecha, an enthusiastic and optimistic person with a confident and hard-working attitude. I can use my collaborative skills and abilities to study and work in groups. I belong to Junagadh in Gujarat, my father is a government servant and my mother is a self-employee. “There is nothing I believe more strongly than getting young people interested in science and engineering, for a better tomorrow, for all humankind”. This is what is rightly said by the science guy BILL NYE. I have always been fascinated by the sciences. From the day I was first introduced to the captivating concepts of science and medicine in particular I always dreamt of a career associated with them. At a tender age of 8 years I saw my grandfather taking his medication regular and time to time for a long period which led me nothing but ponder; what are these medicines required for? What effect do they possess? As a first step out of school I decided to take up biology, physics and chemistry as my optional subjects which would lay the foundations for my goal in 10+2.
I would like to have this opportunity to introduce myself as
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Kushal
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Parecha
, an enthusiastic and optimistic person with a confident and
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hard
-working attitude. I can
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use
my collaborative
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skills
and abilities to study and work in groups.
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I
belong to
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Junagadh
in Gujarat, my father is a
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government
servant and my mother is a self-employee. “There is nothing I believe more
strongly
than getting young
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people
interested in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
science
and engineering, for a better tomorrow, for all humankind”. This is what is
rightly
said by the
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science
guy BILL
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NYE
. I have always
been fascinated
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sciences
. From the day I was
first
introduced to the captivating concepts of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
science
and medicine
in particular
I always dreamt of a career associated with them. At a tender age of 8 years I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
my grandfather taking his medication regular and time to time for a long period which led me nothing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
ponder; what are these medicines required for? What effect do they possess? As a
first
step out of school I decided to take up biology, physics and chemistry as my optional subjects which would lay the foundations for my goal in 10+2.
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IELTS essay I would like to have this opportunity to introduce myself as Kushal Parecha

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  American English
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195 words
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