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I will talk about what I am doing yedterday

I will talk about what I am doing yedterday BYrgj

Good evening, Today, I will talk about what I'm doing yesterday. Yesterday, after we finished our breakfast, my auntie Ahlam called me to go with her to the dentist. First, I said no but she begged me to go with her and then I agreed so I went to grandma's house and we found there my cousins Rawan, Razan, and Rua'a. They prepared for launch rice with lentils and lasagna with ground meat and it's so scrumptious. Honestly, I like it. when we finished launch we got out to the balcony and brought some coffee and oats with us and after that they brought lemonade. Some bees attacked us there and we escaped. Razan's daughter dropped and she hurts her eye and a lot of blood came out of it, and we put a plaster on it. Then she slept for three hours and when she woke up, she very well. Auntie Huda took her to the hypermarket and brought a lot of chips, chocolate, and oats. When we decide to go home uncle Waleed told us that he would arrive us. When I arrived I found my dad waited me and mom. He took my mom with him to bring my sister from her work and bought some coffee.

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Good
 evening, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
, I will talk about what I'm doing yesterday. Yesterday, after we finished our breakfast, my auntie Possible spelling mistake found.Ah lam
Ahlam
 called me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 her to the dentist. First
, I said no This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she begged me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 her and then I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I went to grandma's Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).house, and
house and
 we found there my cousins Possible spelling mistake found.RowanRa wanRaw an
Rawan
, Possible spelling mistake found.Kazan
Razan
, and Possible spelling mistake found.RUARunRNARSAUARue
Rua
'a. They prepared for launch rice with lentils and lasagna with ground meat and it's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 scrumptious. Honestly
, I like it. when we finished launch we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 out to the balcony and brought This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 coffee and oats with us and after that they brought lemonade. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 bees attacked us there and we escaped. Possible spelling mistake found.Kazan
Razan
's daughter Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).dropped, and
dropped and
 she hurts her eye and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 blood came out of it, and we put a plaster on it. Then she slept for three hours and when she woke up, she This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. Auntie Possible spelling mistake found.HUDHula
Huda
 took her to the hypermarket and brought This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 chips, chocolate, and oats. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 we decide to go home uncle Possible spelling mistake found.WalkedWalledWaled
Waleed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 us that he would arrive us. When I arrived I found my dad waited me and mom. He took my mom with him to bring my sister from her work and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 coffee. 