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I was so happy when I saw the car coming

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I was so happy when I saw the car coming. Dad has returned from a two-year business trip to Russia. My mother and I have been waiting at the gate since early morning. Neighbors passing by also congratulated my mother and me and - When he comes back, the two of you are very happy, the neighborhood also has an uncle. C is glad that Dad is home - I shouted. He also greeted loudly - I'm back! How's everyone? Then I ran over and hugged my dad as soon as he got out of the car. My whole family is very happy. That night, he told me about the nights he couldn't sleep because he missed us. My mother hugged my father and me in her arms and I think there is nothing better than our family, so warm.

I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 happy when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 the car coming. Dad has returned from a two-year business trip to Russia. My mother and I have been waiting at the gate since early morning. Neighbors passing by also
 congratulated my mother and me and Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 When he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 back, the two of you are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy, the neighborhood also
 has an uncle. C is glad that Dad is home Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 I shouted. He also
 greeted loudly
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 I'm back! How's everyone? Then I ran over and hugged my dad as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 out of the car. My whole family is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy. That night, he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me about the nights he couldn't sleep This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he missed us. My mother hugged my father and me in her arms and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 there is nothing better than our family, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 warm. 