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I was so happy when I saw the car coming

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I was so happy when I saw the car coming. Dad has returned from a two-year business trip to Russia. My mother and I have been waiting at the gate since early morning. Neighbors passing by also congratulated my mother and me and - When he comes back, the two of you are very happy, the neighborhood also has an uncle. C is glad that Dad is home - I shouted. He also greeted loudly - I'm back! How's everyone? Then I ran over and hugged my dad as soon as he got out of the car. My whole family is very happy. That night, he told me about the nights he couldn't sleep because he missed us. My mother hugged my father and me in her arms and I think there is nothing better than our family, so warm.
I was
so
happy when I
saw
the car coming. Dad has returned from a two-year business trip to Russia. My mother and I have been waiting at the gate since early morning. Neighbors passing by
also
congratulated my mother and me and
-
When he
comes
back, the two of you are
very
happy, the neighborhood
also
has an uncle. C is glad that Dad is home
-
I shouted. He
also
greeted
loudly
-
I'm back! How's everyone? Then I ran over and hugged my dad as
soon
as he
got
out of the car. My whole family is
very
happy. That night, he
told
me about the nights he couldn't sleep
because
he missed us. My mother hugged my father and me in her arms and I
think
there is nothing better than our family,
so
warm.
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IELTS essay I was so happy when I saw the car coming

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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