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Some people believe that life in a big city is difficult while others say that is more convenient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities.

Some people believe that life in a big city is difficult while others say that is more convenient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities. a77BG
It is considered by a few individuals that viability in the metro city is tough, whilst others think that it is more suitable. The predominant advantage behind this phenomenon is the good transport system and the paramount drawback behind this circumstance is a high level of pollution. To commence with, living in megacities is good for humans because in these cities all transport systems are easily available. In other words, masses can simply travel to any place at any time because buses, cable cars, subways, and metro trains are comfortably accessible. For epitome, a survey conducted by the National Sample Survey Office (NSS O ) revealed that in big cities 93 percent of people never face any trouble regarding the transport system. Hence, megacities are very appropriate for people about the transport system. However, the primary weakness to live in metro cities is pollution because there is a large no of cars, buses, and trains are working as well as chemical factories. In other words, vehicles and synthetic organizations produce so many toxic gasses which harmful to human beings and also to the environment. A lot of diseases are spread by this pollution. For instance, World Health Organization (WHO) revealed that in big cities 87 % of pollution is more than in small cities. Thus, in metro cities, the pollution rate is high than in other living places. To conclude, although living in big cities is convenient for folks, it is irrefutable that pollution increases at high speed in these cities is a major problem for the population.
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is considered
by a few individuals that viability in the
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city is tough, whilst others
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that it is more suitable. The predominant advantage behind this phenomenon is the
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good
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transport
system and the paramount drawback behind this circumstance is a high level of pollution.

To commence with, living in
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megacities
is
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good
for humans
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because
in these
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cities
all
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transport
systems are
easily
available. In
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other
words, masses can
simply
travel to any place at any time
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because
buses, cable cars, subways, and
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metro
trains are
comfortably
accessible. For epitome, a survey conducted by the National Sample Survey Office (NSS O
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revealed that in
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big
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cities
93 percent of
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people
never face any trouble regarding the
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transport
system.
Hence
,
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are
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appropriate for
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people
about the
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system.

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, the primary weakness to
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live
in
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metro
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pollution
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because
there is a large
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of cars, buses, and trains are working
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words, vehicles and synthetic organizations produce
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toxic gasses which harmful to human beings and
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to the environment.
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diseases
are spread
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pollution
.
For instance
, World Health Organization (WHO) revealed that in
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big
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cities
87 % of
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pollution
is more than in
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small
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cities
.
Thus
, in
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metro
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cities
, the
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pollution
rate is
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high
than in
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other
living places.

To conclude
, although living in
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big
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cities
is convenient for folks, it is irrefutable that
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pollution
increases at high speed in these
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cities
is a major problem for the population.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that life in a big city is difficult while others say that is more convenient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities.

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