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I want to talk about my holiday in Australia

I want to talk about my holiday in Australia 9akBn

it was interesting excursion because Australia has a lot of jungle, beach and peaceful lake, mountain so on… actually I totally like jangle and sea when I be there, I feel relaxed, there are a lot of wild animals in the jungle for example there are Kangaroo, tiger I want to speak what happened in airport, I went to the Australia with my family, they are my mom, my dad and my brother. when we went to the airport and we got flight card as well as we saw, crowded airport lounge so we couldn’t rest, after that our flight was delayed flight about 8 hours, we were too Tired after 8 hour we got on the airplane it was awful. we came in Melbourne after we had to went to Perth because Perth has a lot of beautiful scenery and we had to get on a train. the train, it had luxurious dining car and comfortable accommodation, it had good restaurant and coffee shop, we slept when we came there in the end: totally, it was perfect holiday, I enjoyed it

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 was interesting excursion This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 Australia has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 jungle, beach and peaceful lake, mountain This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on… actually I totally
 like jangle and sea when I be there, I feel relaxed, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 wild animals in the jungle for example
 there are Kangaroo, tiger

I want to speak what happened in airport, I went to the Australia with my family, they are my mom, my dad and my brother. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
 we went to the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).airport, and
airport and
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 flight card as well
 as we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
, crowded airport lounge This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we couldn’t rest, after that our flight was delayed
 flight about 8 hours, we were too Tired after 8 Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: "hours".hours
hour
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 on the airplane it was awful.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 came in Melbourne after we had to went to Perth This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 Perth has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).scenery, and
scenery and
 we had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 on a train. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 train, it had luxurious dining car and comfortable accommodation, it had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 restaurant and coffee shop, we slept when we came there

in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
:

totally
, it was perfect holiday, I enjoyed it