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wealthy nation help to poor nation

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it is generally assumed that, it is essential the wealthy nation help to the poorer nation when they need help. Initially, They can be providing found and facility for them to be able to help their basic needs such as treatment and health to protect them from harm, because the disease is on the rise when poverty is high, they can help them to expand awareness about health care. Moreever, the wealthy nation can be very helpful into supplying education for them, when people are educated they can be more informed, help themselves and bring up their society.

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