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I think my self is good .

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Let me tell you about my self. I believe that I am very kind and clever child. in other words I am a pupil at school. This is because I am 17 years old. For instance I am a student at Fast Education. Thus I am able to speak English. I will be an interpritor in the future that is why, this profession is very popular job as to why I will be it. On the one hand My self seems to be advantageous. First and foremost, it is very good. What is more, I respect my self. Last but not least, my self is very effectly. On the other hand it appears to be disadvantageous Firstly, it is very uselessness. Secondly, it has hot a lot of bad time. Finally I don't have pass time. My favourite film star is Jackie Chan. Jackie Chan Is a Hong Kong actor inasmuch as he is very talented and famouse actor. He was born in 1954. His nationality is Chinese. I was born and raised in Samarkand. I am from a family of 7. My favourite season is Aoutm since I was born in October so I like this season. My favourite hobby is playing chess. In my opinion my self is not only good but also great.
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interpritor
in the future
that is
why, this profession is
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popular job as to why I will be it. On the one hand My self seems to be advantageous.
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and foremost, it is
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, I respect my self. Last
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not least, my self is
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very
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effectly
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uselessness.
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film star is Jackie Chan. Jackie Chan Is a Hong Kong actor inasmuch as he is
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talented and
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actor. He
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season is
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in October
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I like this season. My
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hobby is playing chess. In my opinion my self is not
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IELTS essay I think my self is good .

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
216 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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