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I t is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

I t is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages. Lbo7R
With the evolution of technology, various discoveries has become possible such as these days scientists and visitors could easily visit to distant natural habitats like South Pole. Though to such extreme places has several benefits, however, also it results in numerous disadvantages. On the one hand, travelling to such places either for scientific reason or just for exploring the area results in new research. For instance, get to know about different small living creatures whose existence is possible only in extreme cold climate. In addition to it, there are high chances to find survival possibilities in such regions in order to make them useful which have been considered useless since the discovery of this only planet where life is possible. On the other hand, plethora of disadvantages exist of exploring new risky geographical locations. Though various technical equipments are made with the assistance of engineers, scientists and other professionals, but it is challenging because equipments may damage at any time resulting in life loss of humans going to such zones. Moreover, there are chances of spread of deadly disease as has been published in recent journal. This spread of contagious illness has been estimated by a research, which has already been done, informing that a large number of harmful microorganisms are found in water which flew from melting of glaciers at North and South pole due to climate change. To recapitulate, without any doubt, there are enormous advantages of exploring extreme natural areas, however, also lead to fatal disadvantages.
With the evolution of technology, various discoveries has become possible such as these days scientists and visitors could
easily
visit to distant natural habitats
like South Pole
. Though to such extreme places has several benefits,
however
,
also
it results in numerous disadvantages.

On the one hand, travelling to such places either for scientific reason or
just
for exploring the area results in new research.
For instance
,
get
to know about
different
small
living creatures whose existence is possible
only
in extreme
cold
climate.
In addition
to it, there are high chances to find survival
possibilities
in such regions in order to
make
them useful which have
been considered
useless since the discovery of this
only
planet where life is possible.

On the other hand
, plethora of disadvantages exist of exploring new risky geographical locations. Though various technical equipments
are made
with the assistance of engineers, scientists and other professionals,
but
it is challenging
because
equipments may damage at any time resulting in life loss of humans going to such zones.
Moreover
, there are chances of spread of deadly disease as has
been published
in recent journal. This spread of contagious illness has
been estimated
by a research, which has already
been done
, informing that
a large number of
harmful microorganisms
are found
in water which flew from melting of glaciers at North and
South pole
due to climate
change
.

To recapitulate, without any doubt, there are enormous advantages of exploring extreme natural areas,
however
,
also
lead to fatal disadvantages.
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IELTS essay I t is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

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