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some people think that reading newspaperis a waste time. To what extent do you agree or disagree

some people think that reading newspaperis a waste time. PR7KX
In this modern world, it is impractical to read newspapers as it takes people’s time purposelessly. I am in complete agreement with this group of people about this idea and below some arguments will be discussed carefully to prove my point. To some extent voices from the other side could also be heard that mainstream news can update more trends or information from a wide range of fields such as education, policy and so on. People would lag behind if they did not keep up with the latest news, especially in Covid 19 pandemic, for instance. Perhaps it is true but they seem to neglect the fact that presses might give rise to negative consequences in both society and entertainment levels in some extent. From a social perspective, with such extensive media coverage, that the readers would be bombarded by information overload. Therefore, people find it hard to look for an official news outlet. Furthermore, some trivial news that people accidentally encounter, distract them from finding important or genuine information. For example, a student is searching for a document but it is such a waste of time to flick through news about his idol instead of concentrating on his work when too many headline-grabbing articles pop up. On the entertainment level, the press tends to mention high-profile personalities and famous figures in order to improve the newspaper industry’s advantage. Gutter presses, headline-grabbing newspapers are getting more and more popular. They distort the reality from celebrities' privacy to their scandals. It makes the readers annoyed because they do not know exactly whether it is true or not. In my conviction, my firm conviction is that reading news is not worth taking time due to the fact that information overload and gutter presses delay our work.
In this modern world, it is impractical to read newspapers as it takes
people’s
time
purposelessly
. I am in complete agreement with this group of
people
about this
idea
and below
some
arguments will
be discussed
carefully
to prove my point.

To
some
extent voices from the other side could
also
be heard
that mainstream
news
can update more trends or
information
from a wide range of fields such as education, policy and
so
on.
People
would lag behind if they did not
keep
up with the latest
news
,
especially
in
Covid 19
pandemic,
for instance
. Perhaps it is true
but
they seem to neglect the fact that
presses
might give rise to
negative
consequences in both society and entertainment levels in
some
extent.

From a social perspective, with such extensive media coverage, that the readers would
be bombarded
by
information
overload.
Therefore
,
people
find it
hard
to look for an official
news
outlet.
Furthermore
,
some
trivial
news
that
people
accidentally
encounter, distract them from finding
important
or genuine
information
.
For example
, a student is searching for a document
but
it is such a waste of time to flick through
news
about his idol
instead
of concentrating on his work when too
many
headline-grabbing articles pop up. On the entertainment level, the
press
tends to mention high-profile personalities and
famous
figures in order to
improve
the newspaper industry’s advantage. Gutter
presses
, headline-grabbing newspapers are getting more and more popular. They distort the reality from celebrities' privacy to their scandals. It
makes
the readers annoyed
because
they do not know exactly whether it is true or not.

In my conviction, my firm conviction is that reading
news
is not worth taking time due to the fact that
information
overload and gutter
presses
delay our work.
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IELTS essay some people think that reading newspaperis a waste time.

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