In this century having a domestic robot appears to be luxurious technological advancement known to people. However, with any household decision, there are both positive and negative effects when you are using [an] automated robotics system into your home. [robotic*]
To begin with, there are some benefits of purchasing domestic robots and using them into [in the] household due to their multitasking ability. From that kind of intelligent technology, it is making life increasingly easier and effective for families. For instance, people, especially, women can finally relax after a long day at work while their robots are doing household chores such as vacuum and floor cleaning, lawn mowing, pool cleaning, window cleaning at home or giving parents opportunities to spend more time with their kids. Parents can help their children to do their homework and they can be aware what problems their kids have. Besides, robots are even now able to perform some functions to help the movement of disabled people or serve as companions to the elderly. Because, robot maids [‘maids’ odd word] are faster and more accurate to serve them.
On the other hand, having robots at home, sometimes, makes children lazy. [why are you using commas here? ] They do not want to do housework like cleaning, cooking because of getting no accustomed to do these works. Furthermore, robots have limited capabilities and have many problems with connection, batteries, devices, systems. They need charging when their batteries run down. Another drawback of home robots is that they are not at a reasonable price. They are now too pricey for local people to afford.
In conclusion, If [if]we do not imply their cons, the domestic robots are helpful things for all people and it influences living standards of people.
By Bobamirzayeva Dilafruz Abduganiyevna
This essay is much better and I really enjoy your examples and further support of your views.
Keep practicing and improving!
Well-done!
In this century having a domestic robot appears to be luxurious technological advancement known to
people
.
However
, with any household decision, there are both
positive
and
negative
effects when you are using [an] automated robotics system into your home. [robotic*]
To
begin
with, there are
some
benefits of purchasing domestic robots and using them into [in the] household due to their multitasking ability. From that kind of intelligent technology, it is making life
increasingly
easier and effective for families.
For instance
,
people
,
especially
, women can
finally
relax after a long day at work while their robots are doing household chores such as vacuum and floor
cleaning
, lawn mowing, pool
cleaning
, window
cleaning
at home or giving parents opportunities to spend more time with their kids. Parents can
help
their children to do their
homework and
they can be aware what problems their kids have.
Besides
, robots are even
now
able to perform
some
functions to
help
the movement of disabled
people
or serve as companions to the elderly.
Because
, robot maids [‘maids’ odd word] are faster and more accurate to serve them.
On the other hand
, having robots at home,
sometimes
,
makes
children lazy. [why are you using commas here?
]
They do not want to do housework like
cleaning
, cooking
because
of getting no accustomed to do these works.
Furthermore
, robots have limited capabilities and have
many
problems with connection, batteries, devices, systems. They need charging when their batteries run down. Another drawback of home robots is that they are not at a reasonable price. They are
now
too pricey for local
people
to afford.
In conclusion
, If [
if
]we do not imply their cons, the domestic robots are helpful things for all
people
and it influences living standards of
people
.
By
Bobamirzayeva
Dilafruz
Abduganiyevna
This essay is much better and I
really
enjoy your examples and
further
support of your views.
Keep
practicing and improving!
Well-done!