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Nowadays more and more people are moving from the countryside to the city. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you think of?

Nowadays more and more people are moving from the countryside to the city. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you think of? XqPAN
A generation ago, an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the municipality. This has become major municipality populated. This essay will discuss why the problem has happened and how it can be solved, described with the supporting statements in the following paragraphs. One of the main causes of the problem is that more population lived in rural however, this days has already decreased over 60% approximately but some people for reasons leaving rural. Mostly young adult leave their homes and migrate to big cities for better job opportunities or for achieved knowledge. Because, there are not good quality study sytem. The solution is for the government should take control ot schools and colleges in remote villages. Another problem is that many people bump into problems in municipality. The main negative effect is the prospect of an increase in the crime rate. In case people from rural areas living in cities fail to apply for a job, they are likely to commit a crime such as drug-trafficking or even human trafficking. As a result, the government should help the job relaxtion and the employment of the population.
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are leaving
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areas to
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live
in the municipality. This has become major municipality populated. This essay will discuss why the
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problem
has happened and how it can
be solved
,
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described
with the supporting statements in the following paragraphs. One of the main causes of the
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problem
is that more population
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lived
in
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rural
however
,
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this days
has already decreased over 60% approximately
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people
for reasons leaving
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rural
.
Mostly
young adult
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leave
their homes and migrate to
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big
cities for better job opportunities or for achieved knowledge.
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good
quality study
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. The solution is for the
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government
should take control
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ot
schools and colleges in remote villages. Another
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problem
is that
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many
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people
bump into
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problems
in municipality. The main
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negative
effect is the prospect of an increase in the crime rate. In case
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people
from
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rural
areas living in cities fail to apply for a job, they are likely to commit a crime such as drug-trafficking or even human trafficking.
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, the
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government
should
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the job
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relaxtion
and the employment of the population.
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IELTS essay Nowadays more and more people are moving from the countryside to the city. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you think of?

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  American English
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191 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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