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I swam with seals and puffins off the south-west coast of Wales

I swam with seals and puffins off the south-west coast of Wales 9ljY7
In Britain it’s always worth hanging around to see what the weather will do. In the case of the islands off the Pembrokeshire Coast national park, I’ve been hanging around, off and on, for more than three decades, going back repeatedly to the Marloes peninsula in the hope of catching the right wind and waves to visit the rocky islets of Skomer, Skokholm and Grassholm. Sometimes the boat was fully booked; more often the service was cancelled due to wind, swells or storms. But this time, finally, it looked hopeful.
In
Britain it
’s always worth hanging around to
see
what the weather will do. In the case of the islands off the
Pembrokeshire
Coast national park, I’ve been hanging around, off and on, for more than three decades, going back
repeatedly
to the
Marloes
peninsula in the hope of catching the right wind and waves to visit the rocky islets of
Skomer
,
Skokholm
and
Grassholm
.
Sometimes
the boat was
fully
booked; more
often
the service
was cancelled
due to wind, swells or storms.
But
this time,
finally
, it looked hopeful.
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IELTS essay I swam with seals and puffins off the south-west coast of Wales

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  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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