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I s computer blessing or curse?

I s computer blessing or curse? mW5OO
The computer is neither blessing nor curse which apparently relies on the application and perspectives of individuals. Since the computer is digital technology, it does not operate the functions itself. As a matter of fact, the impact of such electronic device depends on the way people handle in their daily life. Therefore, the computer is blessing for those who apply to make daily job easier and quicker way. On the contrary, it is curse if the user handle such machine to fulfil the negative attitude.
The computer is neither blessing nor curse which
apparently
relies on the application and perspectives of individuals. Since the computer is digital technology, it does not operate the functions itself. As a matter of fact, the impact of such electronic device depends on the way
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
handle in their daily life.
Therefore
, the computer is blessing for those who apply to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
daily job easier and quicker way.
On the contrary
, it is curse if the user handle such machine to fulfil the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
attitude.

IELTS essay I s computer blessing or curse?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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