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I live in an ordinary house in Nghe An countryside. It is a beautiful area with vast rice fields and rivers.

I live in an ordinary house in Nghe An countryside. It is a beautiful area with vast rice fields and rivers. 8d7dl

I live in an ordinary house in Nghe An countryside. It is a beautiful area with vast rice fields and rivers. My house has 5 rooms: living room, kitchen, bathroom and 2 bedrooms. My favorite room is my bedroom because I can do everything in it like play games, listen to music, and relax all the time. . My house has a small garden next to the kitchen. Here, my mother and I grow a variety of vegetables and flowers. In the spring, all kinds of colorful flowers make my family feel more in love with life, I love my house because I have lived there for 18 years, it has so many happy memories when I was young or growing up with my family. family, friends and neighbours. . No matter how far I go, I will always remember this place

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