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i like to travelling with my friend.

i like to travelling with my friend. N39g0
My parents have gave me a trip to Sapa as a gift for my efforts in the past school year and that trip was a memorable one for me because I went on thattrip with my best friend. Personally, I think a trip will be boring if you don’t have a companion. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explain in the following essay. Firstly, you can save some travel expenses due to the fact that you will share it with you partner. You won't have to prepare everything by yourself. Secondly, when you travel with a companion, you will never feel lonely, sometimes the joy of a trip is not where you go, but who you will go with. Thirdly, travelling with friend makes friendship more connected, have time to confide, to talk and understand each other better. In conclusion, travelling with a companion is the best way to enjoy your trip, so don't be afraid to invite your friends to go on a long trip.
My parents have
gave
me a
trip
to
Sapa
as a gift for my efforts in the past school year and that
trip
was a memorable one for me
because
I went on
thattrip
with my best friend.
Personally
, I
think
a
trip
will be boring if you don’t have a companion. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will
explain
in the following essay.
Firstly
, you can save
some
travel expenses due to the fact that you will share it with you partner. You won't
have to
prepare everything by yourself.
Secondly
, when you travel with a companion, you will never feel lonely,
sometimes
the joy of a
trip
is not where you go,
but
who you will
go with
.
Thirdly
, travelling with friend
makes
friendship more connected, have time to confide, to talk and understand each other better.
In conclusion
, travelling with a companion is the best way to enjoy your
trip
,
so
don't be afraid to invite your friends to go on a long
trip
.
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IELTS essay i like to travelling with my friend.

Essay
  American English
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170 words
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