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I hope you have a good condition with your family. I'm proud of you with your continued for your degree in New Zealand. Congratulations! Now, I want to give you some advice that you should eccept the offer because this can make your dream come true in the future. Other than that, this oppurtunity can gives you more benefits such as can improve your skill like help your communication to being baster. Furthermore, you also can get a lot of interesting experinces.

I hope you have a good condition with your family. I'm proud of you with your continued for your degree in New Zealand. Congratulations! Now, I want to give you some advice that you should eccept the offer because this can make your dream come true in the future. Other than that, this oppurtunity can gives you more benefits such as can improve your skill like help your communication to being baster. Furthermore, you also can get a lot of interesting experinces. 3LPBJ
I hope you have a good condition with your family. I'm proud of you with your continued for your degree in New Zealand. Congratulations! Now, I want to give you some advice that you should eccept the offer because this can make your dream come true in the future. Other than that, this oppurtunity can gives you more benefits such as can improve your skill like help your communication to being baster. Furthermore, you also can get a lot of interesting experinces.
I hope you have a
good
condition with your family. I'm proud of you with your continued for your degree in New Zealand. Congratulations!
Now
, I want to give you
some
advice that you should
eccept
the offer
because
this can
make
your dream
come
true in the future. Other than that, this
oppurtunity
can
gives
you more benefits such as can
improve
your
skill
like
help
your communication to being baster.
Furthermore
, you
also
can
get
a lot of
interesting
experinces
.
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IELTS essay I hope you have a good condition with your family. I'm proud of you with your continued for your degree in New Zealand. Congratulations! Now, I want to give you some advice that you should eccept the offer because this can make your dream come true in the future. Other than that, this oppurtunity can gives you more benefits such as can improve your skill like help your communication to being baster. Furthermore, you also can get a lot of interesting experinces.

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  American English
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82 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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