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people are eating too much meat in Kashkadarya. what are the advantages and disadvantages?

people are eating too much meat in Kashkadarya. what are the advantages and disadvantages? PEjJJ

Meat that is purchased small markets, supermarkets and butchers as well. Everywhere people are eating meat but Kashkadarya shows us huge degree. it is benefit for them but its result is not very well. i think they cannot stop eating meat because of their ancestors. when Kashkadaryans people eating much food maybe they have outweigh or different diseases. they usually eat cows, sheep and other animals. But cows have a lot of benefit things. For example, they give them daily products and its useful for childrens and adults. In concluded, they should eat meat the same with other countries. Then they have a normal life. Because it is not good work eating a lots of meat

You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfoodstuff
Meat
that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 markets, supermarkets and butchers as well
. Everywhere This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconsumptiondiningchewing
eating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfoodstuff
meat
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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Kashkadarya
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shows
 us huge degree. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 is benefit for them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 its result is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
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think
 they cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconsumptiondiningchewing
eating
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfoodstuff
meat
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of their ancestors. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kashkadaryans
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconsumptiondiningchewing
eating
 much food maybe they have Use past participle here: "outweighed".outweighed
outweigh
 or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 diseases. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
usually
 eat cows, sheep and other animals. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 cows have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 benefit things. For example
, they give them daily products and its useful for Possible spelling mistake found.children
childrens
 and adults. In concluded, they should eat You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfoodfoodstuff
meat
 the same with other countries. Then they have a normal life. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 work You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconsumptiondiningchewing
eating
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a lot" or simply "lots"?a lotlots
a lots
 of Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphmeat.meat!meat?meat:meat,meat;
meat