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i have sent my blessing to all the scientists of this mightly planet earth

i have sent my blessing to all the scientists of this mightly planet earth MrAVp
Throughout the past 10 years, I've seen the significant amount of growth in the technology sector, still there is plethora of room available for improvement. On the contrary, it is to be considered that the expectations of the smart people regarding the potential capacity of the mechanical phenomena is already high and currently we are not even close to their expectation. Consequently, exactly what ought to be done? let me guess, bulls eye! We are supposed to work on the improvement right. Eventually it will be difficult but further improvement with make it easy enough. In the end of the day whatever the results would come, it might be forced onto future generations. It is obvious that the investment in fossil fuels would have no effect other than disappointment.
Throughout the past 10 years, I've
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seen
the significant amount of growth in the technology sector,
still
there is plethora of room available for improvement.
On the contrary
, it is to
be considered
that the expectations of the smart
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people
regarding the potential capacity of the mechanical phenomena is already high and
currently
we are not even close to their expectation.
Consequently
, exactly what ought to
be done
?
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let
me guess, bulls eye! We
are supposed
to work on the improvement right.
Eventually
it will be difficult
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but
further
improvement with
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make
Did you mean "is" or "it is"?
it
easy
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enough
. In the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the day whatever the results would
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come
, it might
be forced
onto future generations. It is obvious that the investment in fossil fuels would have no effect other than disappointment.

IELTS essay i have sent my blessing to all the scientists of this mightly planet earth

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  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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