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i have a bestfriend and how i meet my bestfriend ?

i have a bestfriend and how i meet my bestfriend? nEREl
About six years ago. when i came in in the middle school. At the 6 grade, it's funny to meet all of new friends but i thought i would never have a best friend. When i move up the 7 grade, i found out had a friend who had same my hobby. At the entertainment center, i learnt how to guitar and so does he. And from there, we played together. We regular practived together, did homework and all of things also together. Oppps, i didn't know why we became best friends? And now, i graduated highschool and waiting come in college. Even though we don't study the same school but i still keep contact and play together. It's so sad to stay home to avoid pandemic. When the pandemic the end, we will hang out together.
About six years ago.
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up the 7 grade,
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found out had a
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who had same my hobby. At the entertainment center,
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does he. And from there, we played together.
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together, did homework and
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didn't know why we became best
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graduated
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, we will hang out together.

IELTS essay i have a bestfriend and how i meet my bestfriend?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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