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The plans underneath illustrate the design of the university building sport corner at the moment, and how its going to be after the reconstruction. Overall, in terms of redeveloping the sports Centre there will be considerably numerous changes, like, there will be a leisure pool, a triple changing room, and so on. There are lots of things that will remain constant at the site for example, the gym, the changing room and seating, not to forget mentioning The Reception that past the main entrance as well. In the future, outdoor rooms will be replaced by several outstanding activity rooms, for instance, a sport hall on the east of the seating room, surrounded by a doubled dance studio on the corner of the building, and a changing room next to a café. On the other side of the site, there will be a leisure pool, an extra changing room, and a sport shop next to the room.
The plans underneath illustrate the design of the university building
sport
corner at the moment, and how
its
going to be after the reconstruction.
Overall
, in terms of redeveloping the
sports
Centre
there will be
considerably
numerous
changes
, like, there will be a leisure pool, a triple
changing
room
, and
so
on.

There are lots of things that will remain constant at the site
for example
, the gym, the
changing
room
and seating, not to forget mentioning The Reception that past the main entrance
as well
.

In the future, outdoor
rooms
will
be replaced
by several outstanding activity
rooms
,
for instance
, a
sport
hall on the east of the seating
room
, surrounded by a doubled dance studio on the corner of the building, and a
changing
room
next
to a café. On the other side of the site, there will be a leisure pool, an extra
changing
room
, and a
sport
shop
next
to the
room
.
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IELTS essay Gruffly I will send it in ur name if ur in ur name

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