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Tpo 42, task integrated, birds and glass

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the main idea of the text and talk is about glass buildings are too dangerous for birds. the reading states that there are a number of solutions to this problem. the lecture finds this idea dubious, citing three reasons to reject the points in the reading. Firstly, the reading states that regular clear glass is better because the birds can see out. they realize the glass form a solid barrier and will not fly again through it. In contrast, the lecturer mentions that the regular glass is a problem, it reflects like a mirror, and birds can not see the mirror because they see the reflection of trees and sky and birds will confuse. secondly, it was mentioned in the reading the use of colorful lines is suitable. birds can see colorful painted patterns on the glass. While, the lecturer denies it, saying that this way has a problem. realizing fly in between these colorful lines or patterns is too difficult for birds due to the darkroom extremely small inside. Finally, the author argues that creating an artificial magnetic than help bird to find its ways. this instrument makes signals that birds notice its fraction. On the other hand, the lecturer refutes the idea this device is beneficial for navigating long-distance in warm weather or in winter. however, birds have the ability to fly short_ distances from one city to another with eyes light, but it could not determine this single. the electromagnets would have much effect on birds.
the
main
idea
of the text and talk is about
glass
buildings are too
dangerous
for
birds
.
the
reading states that there are a number of solutions to this problem.
the
lecture finds this
idea
dubious, citing three reasons to reject the points in the reading.

Firstly
, the reading states that regular
clear
glass
is better
because
the
birds
can
see
out.
they
realize the
glass
form a solid barrier and will not
fly
again through it.
In contrast
, the lecturer mentions that the regular
glass
is a problem, it reflects like a mirror, and
birds
can not
see
the mirror
because
they
see
the reflection of trees and sky and
birds
will confuse.

secondly
, it
was mentioned
in the reading the
use
of colorful lines is suitable.
birds
can
see
colorful painted patterns on the
glass
. While, the lecturer denies it, saying that this way has a problem.
realizing
fly
in between these colorful lines or patterns is too difficult for
birds
due to the darkroom
extremely
small
inside.

Finally
, the author argues that creating an artificial
magnetic
than
help
bird
to find its ways.
this
instrument
makes
signals that
birds
notice its fraction.
On the other hand
, the lecturer refutes the
idea
this device is beneficial for navigating long-distance in warm weather or in winter.
however
,
birds
have the ability to
fly
short_ distances from one city to another with eyes light,
but
it could not determine this single.
the
electromagnets would have much effect on
birds
.
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IELTS essay Tpo 42, task integrated, birds and glass

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
249 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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