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I am writing this email to show you how to transfer your folders of data to a new laptop. First, make sure that both ole computer and new laptop are on. Then, let plug memory stick into the oldcomputer.Next, drag the folders that you want to transfer to memory stick by using Windows Explorer. You should wait for a few minutes because it takes several time to finish. After that, unplug memory stick from the oldcomputer and plug it into new laptop.Finally, drag the folders that you have copied from memory stick to your new laptop.That is the steps you should follow to tranfers the folders to a new laptop. If you have any question, just emailfor me.

I am writing this email to show you how to transfer your folders of data to a new laptop. First, make sure that both ole computer and new laptop are on. Then, let plug memory stick into the oldcomputer. Next, drag the folders that you want to transfer to memory stick by using Windows Explorer. You should wait for a few minutes because it takes several time to finish. After that, unplug memory stick from the oldcomputer and plug it into new laptop. Finally, drag the folders that you have copied from memory stick to your new laptop. That is the steps you should follow to tranfers the folders to a new laptop. If you have any question, just emailfor me. EpMOL
I am writing this email to show you how to transfer your folders of data to a new laptop. First, make sure that both ole computer and new laptop are on. Then, let plug memory stick into the oldcomputer. Next, drag the folders that you want to transfer to memory stick by using Windows Explorer. You should wait for a few minutes because it takes several time to finish. After that, unplug memory stick from the oldcomputer and plug it into new laptop. Finally, drag the folders that you have copied from memory stick to your new laptop. That is the steps you should follow to tranfers the folders to a new laptop. If you have any question, just emailfor me.
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folders
that you want to transfer to
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by using Windows Explorer. You should wait for a few minutes
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to finish. After that, unplug
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and plug it into
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new
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laptop
.
Finally
, drag the
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folders
that you have copied from
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memory
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stick
to your
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new
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laptop
.
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the steps you should follow to
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IELTS essay I am writing this email to show you how to transfer your folders of data to a new laptop. First, make sure that both ole computer and new laptop are on. Then, let plug memory stick into the oldcomputer. Next, drag the folders that you want to transfer to memory stick by using Windows Explorer. You should wait for a few minutes because it takes several time to finish. After that, unplug memory stick from the oldcomputer and plug it into new laptop. Finally, drag the folders that you have copied from memory stick to your new laptop. That is the steps you should follow to tranfers the folders to a new laptop. If you have any question, just emailfor me.

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