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I am a sophomore at national academy of education management

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I am a sophomore at national academy of education management. The academy is known as one of the academy with best training quality in education management. The academy was estabulished in 2006. The campus has a lot of trees and flower. it is beautifull and fresh air. Especially, after studying, I saw that the lectures are friendly. The academy has 5 main training major, , meanwhile I am studying majoring in english liguistics and literature of the academy. I put in a lot of effort to get in here. this is an acedemy where many people dream of learning to develop themsrlves. National academy of education management is my pride.
I am a sophomore at national
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has 5 main training major,
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english
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liguistics
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. I put in
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of education management is my pride.
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IELTS essay I am a sophomore at national academy of education management

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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