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They had a really nice date. She was nervous for the first date. at 6 p.ms She started choosing clothes and wearing makeup. At 7 p.m. he arrived her house and waited for her in front of the gate. She walked to the door and looked at him, then went downstair. The weather was nice. He drove her to an Italian restaurant. The food was delicious, especially the dessert. The flowers were nice, and the music was amazing.

They had a really nice date. She was nervous for the first date. at 6 p. ms She started choosing clothes and wearing makeup. At 7 p. m. he arrived her house and waited for her in front of the gate. She walked to the door and looked at him, then went downstair. The weather was nice. He drove her to an Italian restaurant. The food was delicious, especially the dessert. The flowers were nice, and the music was amazing. 7L2gk
They had a really nice date. She was nervous for the first date. at 6 p. ms She started choosing clothes and wearing makeup. At 7 p. m. he arrived her house and waited for her in front of the gate. She walked to the door and looked at him, then went downstair. The weather was nice. He drove her to an Italian restaurant. The food was delicious, especially the dessert. The flowers were nice, and the music was amazing.
They had a
really
nice date. She was nervous for the
first
date.
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at
6 p. ms She
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
choosing clothes and wearing makeup. At 7 p. m. he arrived her
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and waited for her in front of the gate. She walked to the door and looked at him, then went
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downstair
. The weather was nice. He drove her to an Italian restaurant. The food was delicious,
especially
the dessert. The flowers were nice, and the music was amazing.
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IELTS essay They had a really nice date. She was nervous for the first date. at 6 p. ms She started choosing clothes and wearing makeup. At 7 p. m. he arrived her house and waited for her in front of the gate. She walked to the door and looked at him, then went downstair. The weather was nice. He drove her to an Italian restaurant. The food was delicious, especially the dessert. The flowers were nice, and the music was amazing.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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