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As everyone knows, soccer is very popular in the world. It started in 2500 BCE in China, most everyone can play. This game is not punishing the poor or rich. this Sports is connecting everyone and makes them responsible for exchanging relations in society. In addition, playing soccer helps us makes a lot of money to service in our lives. Nowadays, more young teenagers play this game. However, the game is required professional skills which you must be proficient and takes us to spend much time practicing. In conclusion, playing soccer creates some advantages for many people especially the poor who have a wish to practice in a team. From generation to generation, this sport is very famous and extremely beloved everywhere.

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