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I agree with this statement. If chosen correctly some television shows can teach kids important values and life lessons, and also help develop socialization and learning skills. However, uncareful parents might leave their children watching violent television programs which can result in emotional distress and behavior problems. In conclusion, I think children can learn effectively when watching tv and this should be encouraged when it comes to educational age-appropriate programs, but monitored (by parents) when it's potentially harmful.

I agree with this statement. If chosen correctly some television shows can teach kids important values and life lessons, and also help develop socialization and learning skills. However, uncareful parents might leave their children watching violent television programs which can result in emotional distress and behavior problems. In conclusion, I think children can learn effectively when watching tv and this should be encouraged when it comes to educational age-appropriate programs, but monitored (by parents) when it's potentially harmful. QRLe1
I agree with this statement. If chosen correctly some television shows can teach kids important values and life lessons, and also help develop socialization and learning skills. However, uncareful parents might leave their children watching violent television programs which can result in emotional distress and behavior problems. In conclusion, I think children can learn effectively when watching tv and this should be encouraged when it comes to educational age-appropriate programs, but monitored (by parents) when it's potentially harmful.
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IELTS essay I agree with this statement. If chosen correctly some television shows can teach kids important values and life lessons, and also help develop socialization and learning skills. However, uncareful parents might leave their children watching violent television programs which can result in emotional distress and behavior problems. In conclusion, I think children can learn effectively when watching tv and this should be encouraged when it comes to educational age-appropriate programs, but monitored (by parents) when it's potentially harmful.

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2 paragraphs
78 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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