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Hyderpora encounter: Bodies of 2 Srinagar residents exhumed in Handwara

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Authorities have exhumed the bodies of two residents from a graveyard at Wadder Zachaldara in Jammu and Kashmir's Handwara, where they were buried along with two other persons who were killed in the encounter at Hyderpora on Monday. The two residents are Mohammad Altaf Bhat and Dr Mudassir Gul. A controversy erupted over Monday's encounter in Hyderpora following conflicting claims about the two deceased as their family members contested the police's charge that they were terror associates. The bodies were exhumed after sundown and are likely to be handed over to their families later in the night, they said, officials said. It will be a peaceful burial with no assembling of crowds. This will be the first time that the body of a person buried under police watch is being returned to his kin since the outbreak of the Covid-19 pandemic in March last year. The bodies, accompanied by a police team, are being moved to Srinagar from Handwara where they were initially buried, the officials said. Earlier in the day, J&K Lieutenant Governor Manoj Sinha ordered a magisterial probe into the Hyderpora encounter, while ensuring that there would be no injustice in the matter. "A magisterial inquiry by an officer of ADM rank has been ordered in the Hyderpora encounter. The government will take suitable action as soon as report is submitted in a time-bound manner. Jammu and Kashmir admin reiterates commitment of protecting lives of innocent civilians and it will ensure there is no injustice, " the office of LG J&K said in a tweet.
Authorities have exhumed the
bodies
of two residents from a graveyard at
Wadder
Zachaldara
in
Jammu
and Kashmir's
Handwara
, where they
were buried
along with two other persons who
were killed
in the
encounter
at
Hyderpora
on Monday.

The two residents are Mohammad
Altaf
Bhat
and Dr
Mudassir
Gul
. A controversy erupted over Monday's
encounter
in
Hyderpora
following conflicting claims about the two deceased as their family members contested the police's charge that they were terror associates.

The
bodies
were exhumed
after sundown and are likely to
be handed
over to their families later in the night, they said, officials said. It will be a peaceful burial with no assembling of crowds.

This will be the
first
time that the
body
of a person buried under police
watch
is
being returned
to his kin since the outbreak of the Covid-19 pandemic in March last year.

The
bodies
, accompanied by a police team, are being
moved
to Srinagar from
Handwara
where they were
initially
buried, the officials said. Earlier in the day,
J&K
Lieutenant Governor Manoj
Sinha
ordered a magisterial probe into the
Hyderpora
encounter
, while ensuring that there would be no injustice in the matter.

"
A magisterial inquiry by an officer of ADM rank has
been ordered
in the
Hyderpora
encounter
. The
government
will take suitable action as
soon
as report
is submitted
in a time-bound manner.
Jammu
and Kashmir admin reiterates commitment of protecting
lives
of innocent civilians and it will ensure there is no injustice,
"
the office of LG
J&K
said in a tweet.
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IELTS essay Hyderpora encounter: Bodies of 2 Srinagar residents exhumed in Handwara

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