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Write a short story that includes a main character, conflict and resolution.

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On a sunny day, Mom and Dad wished they had a beautiful flower to make their lives more beautiful. One day, Mom felt a beautiful flower sprout in her heart and Dad felt love in her heart. Their wish had been fulfilled. Days passed and Mom was very happy and excited. She felt a tiny boat is surfing in her heart. She wanted to find out the secret. A kind doctor took a picture of Mommy's heart. Oh my God, a little girl looked like a beautiful flower was in mommy's heart and she smiled at them. Mom and Dad were overjoyed and decided to choose the most beautiful name in the world for her. They thought for a while and then they both said: We will name her Negar. This is the most beautiful name in the world. Days passed one after another. Mom, dad and Negar were happy. They were playing, laughing and eating delicious foods and Ice creams. They bought beautiful clothes and toys for their daughter. Little Negar wanted to hug and kiss Mom and Dad as soon as possible. So he got ready to go on the most exciting journey of his life. Finally, little Negar was born. Mom and Dad and all the family fell in love with Negar when they saw him. It was unbelievable. Negar was more beautiful than his photos. It was the most beautiful and happy day of their lives for everyone
On a sunny day,
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Mom
and
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Dad
wished they had a
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beautiful
flower to
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make
their
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lives
more
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beautiful
. One day,
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Mom
felt a
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beautiful
flower sprout in her
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heart
and
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Dad
felt
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love
in her
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heart
. Their wish had
been fulfilled
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Days passed and
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Mom
was
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very
happy and excited. She felt a tiny boat is surfing in her
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heart
. She wanted to find out the secret. A kind doctor took a picture of
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Mommy
's
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heart
. Oh my God, a
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little
girl looked like a
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beautiful
flower was in
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mommy
's
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heart and
she smiled at them.

Mom and
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Dad
were overjoyed
and decided to choose the most
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beautiful
name in the world for her.

They
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thought
for a while and then they both said:

We will name her
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Negar
. This is the most
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Days passed one after another.
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Mom
,
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dad
and
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Negar
were happy. They were playing, laughing and eating delicious foods and Ice creams.

They
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bought
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beautiful
clothes and toys for their daughter.

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Little
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Negar
wanted to hug and kiss
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and
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as
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soon
as possible.
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he
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ready to go on the most exciting journey of his life.

Finally
,
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little
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Negar
was born
.
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Mom
and
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Dad
and all the family fell in
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love
with
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Negar
when they
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saw
him. It was unbelievable.
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Negar
was more
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beautiful
than his photos.

It was the most
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beautiful
and happy day of their
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lives
for everyone
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IELTS essay Write a short story that includes a main character, conflict and resolution.

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
241 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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