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Human well-being and economic goals

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I used to read a lot of books. However, the one of all books I read. I am impressed with a book called “Human well - being and economic goals. The book is written by Frank Ackerman. I was published at Washington D. C: Island Press. To me, this is a great book and I hope that people should find and try to read it. The book showed people that the different points of health and creating the gaps were widening, sparking a big discussion. People are facing the dilemma of whether or not they access to consumption goods and services lead to healthy affection. However, on one side of the point, it was not completed how to explain to life, affect health and consumption choices. Especially, other points supposedly they do not cognitive about health as well as inequalities in health. For example, the biggest percentage in total is focused on poor countries with low income, not knowledge and so on… So, the best solution was proposed: Material well-being and Social participation. This creates a good opportunity for all people like create more jobs to decrease property unemployment, increase human lives. All things are a key to open a light door before. The evidence supposed that the connection between wealth and social participation is important. The book gives many information, reasons and ways to fix the problem. As we see, participating in social life is of high value. If the economy is developed and has a balance between income of people. This is also being form a system focused on an organized insurance to make sure everyone keeps their current standard of living and entitled rights when they old. In conclusion, the book is a great book and has good content. We can understand all of face about economic troubles and benefits when we buy insurance. It will not be useless because it has received a lot of positive feedback.
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being and economic goals. The
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by Frank Ackerman. I
was published
at Washington D. C: Island Press. To me, this is a great
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book
and I hope that
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people
should find and try to read it.

The
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showed
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people
that the
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different
points of
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health
and creating the gaps were widening, sparking a
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big
discussion.
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People
are facing the dilemma of
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whether or not
they access to consumption
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goods
and services lead to healthy affection.
However
, on one side of the point, it was not completed how to
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explain
to life, affect
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health
and consumption choices.
Especially
, other points
supposedly
they do not cognitive about
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health
as well
as inequalities in
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health
.
For example
, the biggest percentage in total
is focused
on poor countries with low income, not knowledge and
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so
on…
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So
, the best solution
was proposed
: Material well-being and Social participation. This creates a
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good
opportunity for all
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people
like create more jobs to decrease property unemployment, increase human
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lives
. All things are a key to open a light door
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before
. The evidence supposed that the
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connection between
wealth and social participation is
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important
. The
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, reasons and ways to
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fix
the problem. As we
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, participating in social life is of high value. If the economy
is developed
and has a balance between income of
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people
. This is
also
being form a system focused on an organized insurance to
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make
sure everyone
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keeps
their
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current
standard of living and entitled rights when they
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old
.

In conclusion
, the
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is a great
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book
and has
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good
content. We can understand
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all of face
about economic troubles and benefits when we
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buy
insurance. It will not be useless
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a lot of
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positive
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IELTS essay Human well-being and economic goals

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
321 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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