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Human beings and the way that they live

Human beings and the way that they live Olb9k

Humans are gradually weakening some of them live majestic And they reach the summit of success Some also live with deliberate and they heed the way that they choose for life certain of people abide by ethics fundamental and They are unify with their family but in the other hand a number of others are vandal and traitor that In this way, these type of people invite drought to their lives And they are not even willing to give their surplus of money to their heirs In this world, we should try to leave a good name for ourselves.

Humans are gradually
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some
 of them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
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Some
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 with Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).deliberate, and
deliberate and
 they heed the way that they choose for life certain of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 abide by ethics Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).fundamental, and
fundamental and
 They are Consider using a past participle here: "unified".unified
unify
 with their family This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the other hand a number of others are vandal and traitor that In this way, these type of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 invite drought to their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 And they are not even willing to give their surplusPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
of money to their heirs In this world, we should try to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 name for ourselves. 