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Human and technology in the world

Human and technology in the world 2RDqM
Humans and technology Now days human earn with the help of technology Now 95 percentage of people use mobiles laptops for their entertainment and for their earnings human can easily earn money with the help of technology such as become YouTuber and generally 80 percent of human earn money to do their jobs in Mnc’s to run their lives and for their family too Technology plays an important rule in human world now human have addiction toward to their phones and many more another items
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IELTS essay Human and technology in the world

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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