Undoubtedly, natural environment around the globe has severely affected by the human lifestyle. Although some argue that the effect is irreversible, others think that ceratin measures can make a difference. I agree with the latter view and believe that the situation can be reversed by preserving what is remained.
On the one hand, the damage caused by humans to the natural environment such as deforestation is considered to be unchanged. Millions of trees are cut down every year for fulfilling the human lifestyle needs. This has not only accelerated climate change around the world but also destroyed the natural habitats of several animal species. Many species have become endangered and are near to complete extinction. For example, in China, deforestation of bamboo trees has threatened pandas to extinct more than the hunting of these animals.
On the other hand, I would argue that despite the damage already done to the environment, there is still hope that the current situation can be reversed by taking certain steps such as raising awareness among the people, planting new trees, and rebuilding natural sanctuaries for the endangered species. For instance, Ethiopia set a world record on 30 July 2019 by planting 350 million trees within 12 hours to designated areas in the country. This not only contributed significantly to lowering the greenhouse emission levels but also restored the natural habitat for native animals.
In conclusion, although human activities have affected the environment fatally, I believe that some extra-ordinary measures can still preserve and improve the environment.
Undoubtedly
,
natural
environment
around the globe has
severely
affected
by the
human
lifestyle. Although
some
argue that the effect is irreversible, others
think
that
ceratin
measures can
make
a difference. I
agree
with the latter view and believe that the situation can
be reversed
by preserving what
is remained
.
On the one hand, the damage caused by
humans
to the
natural
environment
such as deforestation
is considered
to
be unchanged
. Millions of
trees
are
cut
down every year for fulfilling the
human
lifestyle needs. This has not
only
accelerated climate
change
around the world
but
also
destroyed
the
natural
habitats of several animal species.
Many
species have become endangered and are near to complete extinction.
For example
, in China, deforestation of bamboo
trees
has threatened pandas to extinct more than the hunting of these animals.
On the other hand
, I would argue that despite the damage already done to the
environment
, there is
still
hope that the
current
situation can
be reversed
by taking certain steps such as raising awareness among the
people
, planting new
trees
, and rebuilding
natural
sanctuaries for the endangered species.
For instance
, Ethiopia set a world record on 30 July 2019 by planting 350 million
trees
within 12 hours to designated areas in the country. This not
only
contributed
significantly
to lowering the greenhouse emission levels
but
also
restored the
natural
habitat for native animals.
In conclusion
, although
human
activities have
affected
the
environment
fatally
, I believe that
some
extra-ordinary measures can
still
preserve and
improve
the
environment
.
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