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Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. 3aYX5
During human evolution, the environment, especially plants and animal species, has been damaged seriously. Somebody holds the view that people can get better at this problem whereas others consider that all of the measures are too late to become possible. In my opinion, I agree with the former because of several reasons I will mention below. On the one hand, some serious consequences which were caused in the past are impossible to be solved now. It is essential to realize that too many creatures are completely extinct that results from exceedly exploitating and hunting. Thus, the disappearance of those species leads to obstacles to regenerate their habitats. For example, the last Sumatra Rhino in Malaysia died in 2019, albeit collaborative efforts of the government to sustain its life. As a result, this event was the end sign of this spiece since scientists can not seek their gene anywhere on the Earth. On the other hand, some people believe that this bad statement can be solved by practical solutions. Besides economic advantages, people should evaluate the effects of their behaviours on the environment. In addition, the government can implement several stricter policies. For instance, the authority should impose the higher fine or cease operation of firms and organisations discharging chemicals into rivers or sea that destroy the aquatic ecosystems. In terms of science institutions, genes of creatures which are on the verge of extinction can be maintained in order to bring them back to life in the unfortunate case. Foremost, education which advances the awareness of residents can make the important stage to save the planet from devastation. In conclusion, nowaday, negative impacts on plants and animal species that were caused by human activities are an insurmountable problem of general society. Therefore, from now on, people should salvage this situation by effective measures.
During human evolution, the environment,
especially
plants and animal species, has
been damaged
seriously
. Somebody holds the view that
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people
can
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get
better at this problem whereas others consider that
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all of the
measures are too late to become possible. In my opinion, I
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agree
with the former
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because
of several reasons I will mention below.

On the one hand,
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some
serious consequences which
were caused
in the past are impossible to
be solved
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now
. It is essential to realize that too
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many
creatures are completely extinct that results from
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exceedly
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exploitating
and hunting.
Thus
, the disappearance of those species leads to obstacles to regenerate their habitats.
For example
, the last Sumatra Rhino in Malaysia
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
died
in 2019, albeit collaborative efforts of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to sustain its life.
As a result
, this
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event
was the
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end
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sign
of this
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spiece
since scientists can not seek their gene anywhere on the Earth.

On the other hand
,
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some
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people
believe that this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
statement can
be solved
by practical solutions.
Besides
economic advantages,
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people
should evaluate the effects of their
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behaviours
on the environment.
In addition
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
can implement several stricter policies.
For instance
, the authority should impose the higher fine or cease operation of firms and
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organisations
discharging chemicals into rivers or sea that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroy
the aquatic ecosystems. In terms of science institutions, genes of creatures which are on the verge of extinction can
be maintained
in order to bring them back to life in the unfortunate case. Foremost, education which advances the awareness of residents can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
stage to save the planet from devastation.

In conclusion
,
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nowaday
,
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negative
impacts on plants and animal species that
were caused
by human activities are an insurmountable problem of general society.
Therefore
, from
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
on,
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people
should salvage this situation by effective measures.
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IELTS essay Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation.

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