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How the world change before and after coronavirous

How the world change before and after coronavirous 15nXA

All the world suffer from coronalvirus. we can see changes all around the world. We can notes changes even in our life. Before coronavirus we could all stayed, studied, played, surprised and did everything together. We could travel from place to place without fear. We prayed with thousands of people in a closed plase. When coronavirus came it get our life upset down. It destroyed our life. It made us far away from our closer people. We couldn't stay with people safely because we were afraid to catch the disease and get others sick. We contact ed with others only by the internet. In conclusion, the epidemic made our life more difficult and really different from what we used to live.

All the world suffer from Possible spelling mistake found.coronal viruscoronavirus
coronalvirus
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 all around the world. We can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "note"note
notes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 even in our life.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
The comma is probably missing here: "coronavirus, we".coronavirus, we
coronavirus we
 could all stayed, studied, played, surprised and did everything together. We could travel from place to place without fear. We prayed with thousands of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in a closed Possible spelling mistake found.placepleasephaseplaneplatelase
plase
.

“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 coronavirus came it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 our life upset down. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 our life. It made us far away from our closer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. We couldn't stay with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
safely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we were afraid to catch the disease and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 others sick. We contact ed with others This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 by the internet.

In conclusion
, the epidemic made our life more difficult and really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from what we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
. 