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How the world change before and after coronavirous

How the world change before and after coronavirous 15nXA
All the world suffer from coronalvirus. we can see changes all around the world. We can notes changes even in our life. Before coronavirus we could all stayed, studied, played, surprised and did everything together. We could travel from place to place without fear. We prayed with thousands of people in a closed plase. When coronavirus came it get our life upset down. It destroyed our life. It made us far away from our closer people. We couldn't stay with people safely because we were afraid to catch the disease and get others sick. We contact ed with others only by the internet. In conclusion, the epidemic made our life more difficult and really different from what we used to live.
All the world suffer from
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coronalvirus
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we
can
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see
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changes
all around the world. We can
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notes
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changes
even in our life.

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Before
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coronavirus we
could all stayed, studied, played, surprised and did everything together. We could travel from place to place without fear. We prayed with thousands of
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people
in a closed
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plase
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When
coronavirus came it
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get
our life upset down. It
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destroyed
our life. It made us far away from our closer
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people
. We couldn't stay with
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people
safely
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because
we were afraid to catch the disease and
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get
others sick. We contact ed with others
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only
by the internet.

In conclusion
, the epidemic made our life more difficult and
really
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different
from what we
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used
to
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live
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IELTS essay How the world change before and after coronavirous

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
121 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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