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How were you as a child??????

How were you as a child?????? YmNEQ
As a kid i was an introvert person actually introvert is a person who Like a biochemist studying a colony of bacteria under the microscope, you minutely examine your every thought, feeling, and action. Probing futile questions like "what do other people think of me"? Maybe I shouldn't have said that? These are your constant nagging companions. You are unable to realize that other people don't spend as much time and energy analyzing you as you think.
As a kid
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was an introvert person actually introvert is a person who

Like a biochemist studying a colony of bacteria under the microscope, you
minutely
examine your every
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
, feeling, and action.

Probing futile questions like
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
what do other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
of me
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
? Maybe I shouldn't have said that?

These are your constant nagging companions.

You are unable to realize that other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
don't spend as much time and energy analyzing you as you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
.

IELTS essay How were you as a child??????

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
77 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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